Reviews for Unraveled by Lillian

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MissKatt (Chapter 5) - Wed 11 Apr 2012

Uh ohs. There goes Miroku haha


insomniac_amy (Chapter 5) - Wed 11 Apr 2012

This has started off so good. I can't wait to see what happens.


RubyJeweler (Chapter 4) - Mon 09 Apr 2012

Kagura's gonna make the switch on emails, soon, isn't she? Ooh, I can hardly wait. *Rubs hands in glee*


OneNotToBeTrusted (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Apr 2012

Great beginning!! I love your premise here and I can't wait to see what kind of things she accidently reveals to Sesshoumaru. :)

 

Also, I'm a bit new here. What does DDN stand for?


Diane Peter (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Apr 2012

Pretty good overall, this sentence is really awkwardly worded though; A plan began to bring Kagome down formed in her mind. began should go after down & it should probably be began to form.


MissKatt (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Apr 2012

Nuuuu shes so mean :(


Asdf (Chapter 3) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

This story is very interesting, hope you continue:)


JeniNeji (Chapter 3) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

...eh? :sighs: Poor Kagome... I hope not everyone is like Kagura...


JeniNeji (Chapter 2) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

Hn? Why?! :'(


Calypso (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Apr 2012

Ooh I can't wait to see how this story progresses. You have me intrigued.


Kayelyn (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Apr 2012

Awwww! Poor Kagome. I'm not sure if she is blind to the situation or Kagura is really good at hiding her dislike, but either way it's looking like there will be hilariously awkward situations.

More, please?

Til next time, Lovely


MissKatt (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Apr 2012

Uhhhh oh! Watch out Kagome! She's eviiiiiiillllllll.

 


EtherealCrescent (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012

Ha, I love the title of this chapter and your summary has me intrigued. :) I am looking forward to the story.

-E.C.


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012

HAH! SCOOOORE FOR THEIA!! x) lol. And for you, of course, for a wonderful start to what I'm sure will be a wonderful story. xP


RubyJeweler (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012

Looking forward to future updates. The summary sounds very promising.  ( ;


MissKatt (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012

So mean, Kagura! You didn't even get to know her! :(

 


Luna (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012

Can't wait for more!!


JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Apr 2012
Ah, im sure she will have lots of fun :)

MissKatt (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Apr 2012

EEEEEEEE! I'm so excited :3!!!!

Yay for us and our new drabbles!

-MissKatt

PS: Nice title :3


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