Awwwe... cute.
Hello! Cute little story you've got here, I enjoy reading it! :) I like the light atmosphere you've created between the pair and the humorous snippets.
There were a couple of things I wanted to point out, however. Firstly, at the end of chapter 6 you state that Sesshomaru lets Inuyasha keep the Tensaiga because it seals his demon blood. I think you mean Tetsusaiga (or Tessaiga - both versions are acceptable, I believe).
Also, you mention that Sesshomaru saves Kagome from Magatsuhi. Do you mean Mukotsu, the poison wielder from the Shichinintai? I know he does kinda defend her from Inuyasha (who is possessed by Magatsuhi) in the Final Act, but it occurs right before they destroy Naraku, and – judging from what I’ve read – your story is based around a time before any of that happens.
Anywho, I’m not trying to seem like a know-it-all or anything like that, I just thought I would bring it up. I know I certainly appreciate it when people point out my booboos, cuz sometimes I get lazy when I edit and I miss stuff.
Good stuff! I'm off to read the rest!
Awww the last line was so cute! I love how this story is just the right combination of cute and sexy!!! Its a nice break when I want to get out of doing homework :)
Touche Sesshoumaru!
Awww! That was cute but sexy! Where can I find me a partner to pay this game with lol... not in real life
TKE (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Apr 2012
that was so cute!!
AAHHHH that was so CUTE! Seriously woman, I am in awe! That was wonderful! XD <3 <3 <3
I'm really enjoying this. Have a slight correction though; Tenseiga is Sesshoumaru's sword, Tessaiga/Tetsusaiga is Inuyasha's sword.
SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! More warm fuzzies for me to read!!!! What a delicious tale; so cute, so fuzzy, so... so... SQUEEEE-worthy!!! Ugh, and now I'm abusing the punctuation again, but I just can't help myself! I love this to PIECES and BACK! Still, so ADORABLE!! Definitely going on my fave list for reading again and again!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Manatee (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Apr 2012
ah haha. What a great idea for the socks to be the first. Usually everyone starts with underware. Can't wait to read more!
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