It's too bad this is the last chapter you have recently posted. It's looking good so far I do hope this gets picked up very soon we're coming to the end of the year 2024 it's been quite some time and there hasn't been any new activity from your end. 

The original characters you've added in this chapter and the last one are not too bad. Jaken's character, you kept pretty well intact while adding a bit more disbelief on his end at my Kagome is at Sesshomaru's Shiro Castle. 
Please update this when you can I have nothing more to say but praise happy holidays and happy New Year 2025 to you.

Hello Rinku,         12/21/20204

The Killing Perfection's attitude the way you've written and described him with his discussion and his dislike of Kagame right now is utterly magnificent! 
I do not read a lot of detailed sashimaru / game stories where either character especially social Meru is kept so well intact with their created personalities. If there's one thing I can't stand regardless of any type of fanfiction I read especially if it's too anime and mangas I read or watch is when the Canon cast gets created so out of character but it's very hard to read and watch it's very sickening for me I cannot stand seeing Canon characters become out of character it's a real turn-off for when reading good transaction online. 
You deserve the first prize Blue Ribbon I do not see many writers twhoarcanass in getting Sashimaru's personality down to the letter you're one of the many few on Dokuga in my opinion who has managed to pull that off. 
It's been a while I can't recall fully if I've read this story in the beginning before but out of the story and another that you've posted I know you have a few i'm more for the Canon universe or AU where the Caster is best kept in their original characters as possible. 
I do hope you'll update this story I have quite a few chapters to go but I do hope you will get the time to continue I'm happy to know since it's been a while since I last signed into this account of mine that I did add your username and this story to my watch list here I do hope I will get alerted in my email settings soon that you will pick up the pace and come back and complete this story out of your many unfinished doughs works here on the site. 

Again great job so Sesshomaru's was don agnificent hardly out of character too much at all!

Hello Rinku,         12/21/20204

The Killing Perfection's attitude the way you've written and described him with his discussion and his dislike of Kagame right now is utterly magnificent! 
I do not read a lot of detailed sashimaru / game stories where either character especially social Meru is kept so well intact with their created personalities. If there's one thing I can't stand regardless of any type of fanfiction I read especially if it's too anime and mangas I read or watch is when the Canon cast gets created so out of character but it's very hard to read and watch it's very sickening for me I cannot stand seeing Canon characters become out of character it's a real turn-off for when reading good transaction online. 
You deserve the first prize Blue Ribbon I do not see many writers twhoarcanass in getting Sashimaru's personality down to the letter you're one of the many few on Dokuga in my opinion who has managed to pull that off. 
It's been a while I can't recall fully if I've read this story in the beginning before but out of the story and another that you've posted I know you have a few i'm more for the Canon universe or AU where the Caster is best kept in their original characters as possible. 
I do hope you'll update this story I have quite a few chapters to go but I do hope you will get the time to continue I'm happy to know since it's been a while since I last signed into this account of mine that I did add your username and this story to my watch list here I do hope I will get alerted in my email settings soon that you will pick up the pace and come back and complete this story out of your many unfinished doughs works here on the site. 

Again great job so Sesshomaru's was don agnificent hardly out of character too much at all!

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T_T PLEASE UPDATE RINKU-SAMA THIS FIC IS TOO GOOD 

I really enjoyed this story - very sad it was abandoned 

HA ! I'm sure whenever his urges pop up on him that'll be the first thing to come to mind lol , i also think i'm going to like Takeshi i can tell already . Anywhooo great chap & amazing story so far 

this just gets better and better! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Like the story 

You should have made the tree hurt Sesshomaru. He is not all that great and the tree should have been able to hurt Sesshomaru. When he meets up with Kagome she should be able to do the same.

Great fic cant wait for the next chap

XD lol i really love sessho & kags banters  XD XD please keep updating 

We'll write can't wait to read the rest, hope those two could stand to be in the same room soon 

love! I hope that they can get along soon. 

I love this story so much! I've been waiting for the new chapters after every one. Can't wait to see more!

The characterization in this in really good and the story has good flow. Really enjoying it so far.

This was priceless. I nearly fell out of my chair when Sesshomaru told Kagome. "Cover yourself fool".

Please update soon. i want to know what type of punishment is in store with his captain.

Hmmm I like this story, but I really wish a bit of romance would emerge.

Loving this story! More please

Poor Kagome, she just can't get a break! All sort of situations always befall on her part. 

I feel sad for her. Sesshomaru’s cruelty and sneering face would discourage and hurt her a lot. I can't decide about Sesshomaru’s positive traits, cause at the moment I see none. I get it that he is enraged that she is his mate. Human hating including and all those,  he is not even a good ruler at the moment. Kagome even though is human is still a guest and he had to reprimand his general. AT least I hope he will at least say something. I don't know what you have in mind, but I don't see the Canon Sesshomaru as such cruel being. But that is only my opinion and I respect yours as well. I aplaud you for going the long road for love, but a balance is also needed otherwise it's just a victim of abuse which can be mental as well as physical is loving the person who hurt her. The Stockholm syndrome is too often used in fanfiction. I am not saying you do that, just saying that many authors go that road without really understanding the cruel reality of abuse. I love your writing style and your ideas are unique but I cannnon say I am a fan of your Sesshomaru at the moment. No offence to you! Your writing is amazing to make a reader so worked up! I know you are right and more water and nurturing is needed but somehow I don't believe he will change drastically. Kagome is very forgiving so he is lucky!

Sadoka's pov was very detailed and good. I kept thinking what a bore/jerk is jaken.

I wish you all the best, thank you for updating. Your writing really improved and the description is more fluid.

Take care!