I reallly liked this story it was fun and just a good quixk read. I'd be interested to read the second chapter with part of Sesshomaru's POV like you did in the first one, maybe his satisfaction and joy after finally being able to not hold back anymore. Either way good work!
Words can not explain how much I loved this story ok maybe 1 NICE!
This fic was a wonderful piece. :D It was written out very descriptive and smoothly, but there were several minor errors. No need to worry, it's good. (:
Emma (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 May 2012
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