I have really enjoyed reading this so far. I hope you update soon!

dis story is really good. hope u update soon XD

This story is coming along really well. Every chapter I read leaves me waiting impatiently for the next update, always the sign of an interesting and well-written story. What happens next?

lol i can't tell you what happens next, you'll have to wait and see. i will try to update as often as possible.

cool. man Fluffy still has that icicle up his butt. btw, one thing I noticed [“Hi, Sesshomaru-sama. I’m…” Kagome started. “I’m no longer a lord,” he interrupted.] I don't think the -sama honorific is exactly meaning lord. I've heard in some behind the scenes dvds like interviews with different big anime movie creators and the tv crew calls them -sama....now if Kagome had said Lord Sesshomaru I think that would have been the response. plus I think Fluffy would still want to have the -sama part...

ok thank you

I'm really liking this story. Excellent writing and suspense. I'm really impressed, especially since this is your first fanfic. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

After reading chapter 2, I am even more impressed! I'm loving this story.

You've got me hooked, I can't wait for chapter 4, I hope you are planning on making this a long fic, it has the potential to be one of the really great ones!

Great start. You definately piqued my interest. Please update soon:)

hmm...wonder what parts Fluffy's gonna try to skim over...I wonder if Kaggy can tell through her powers if someone's avoiding something.

hmm...wonder what parts Fluffy's gonna try to skim over...I wonder if Kaggy can tell through her powers if someone's avoiding something.

Great story, especially since it's your first one. The plot is promissing and I for one can't wait to see the next chapter ( evil cliffie ;) ). A note on your layout-problem: At the start and end of each chapter you use a divider (~~~~~) that is too long for the page. And unlike word the browser cannot break it in half when the end of the line is reached, so it extends the page horizontally. If you cut these dividers down to the same size as the smaller ones in the middle of the chapters, the layout should turn out just fine.

NNNNNNNoooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! Don't leave it there. Sigh. Hurry back. Sigh. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I can read chap1 at least fine now. somehow it's working.

interesting.....very interesting. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

The second chapter was great! I really hope you update often because I have decided I like this story a lot. I wish I could help you out with the text off the page issue, but I've never tried to post anything so I wouldn't know. Maybe there is something in the Forum that explains it?

Hey!!! A great idea! I loved it! Keep on writting... Hm... Maybe, could you try a different editor? Perhaps that was the problem with the cut words... Hope to see some more soon!!!! Very best wishes!!

have your tried using a smaller font that may help out a lot , it is a great story so far

it seems very interesting. my one complaint is also about the text going off the page. I c&p'ed it into a word doc so now I know that works. I would very much like to see chap2 and any future chapters.