Do NOT change the way you're writing this story. The fact that you've put so much thought into the process for this story is wonderful. Just because a few impatient, unobservive people get confused shouldn't cause you to change it for them. Clearly, this story isn't the one for them and they should move on to something else. I am willing to work for this story and I'm patient enough to enjoy the journey. Keep going. Don't stop. And happy writing.
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