I absolutely loved it and even though it sucks I have to wait for the sequel, I will do it gladly but extremely impatiently. lol.
Well, I was finally able to read this and although I'm not usually a fan of the AU type fics, I have to say this one caught my attention. And, of course, I couldn't stop reading. I loved the way you included just about everyone from the manga/anime. Including the Band of Seven. And made them all human. That was cool. Kikyou and Kouga being brother and sister was a surprise, however. Still not sure what I think of that. But Kikyou being the bad guy was not a surprise. Especially after her comments to Kouga.
This turned out to be a pleasant surprise for me, another wonderful fic from you as always. But I have to say the ending was the strangest I think I have ever read. Did you kill off Toga? What a cliffhanger!! And, what's going to happen with Kagome's parents? And, Kikyo? And, Kagome and Sesshomaru???????? So cruel!! I was up half the night trying to figure out where all this was going, "bout drove myself nuts!! Ugh!!
I really do hope there is going to be a sequel. I can't wait. So, plz, plz, plz, write it soon, and put me out of my misery, 'kay?? :(
Kind of a very strange place to end it. i really think you need to add more to this chapter to end it before you start the sequel.
I can't believe the Toga is dead... I wonder what the Eastern Lord will think when he finds out that Kikyou is the traitor? What happens to Kagome and Sesshou's relationship now? I hope that everything works out and that Kagome will not be held responsible for Toga's death. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the sequel :P
Happy Holidays!
did you just kill toga? I have enjoyed the story so far and really look forward to the sequel!
I hope that Kagome will get a chance to vent and chat with Sesshou. Do they know what Toga plans to do? Will Kikyou be found out to be the traitor? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Happy Holidays!
good chapter, i hope that Kagome and Sesshomaru can make up and be happy. It will be interesting to see what happens when Kagome does when she see's her parents...
good job...
wow, that is a development. it will be interesting to see when Inuyasha's group gets a hold of the ambassider. good job...
wow, that is a development. it will be interesting to see when Inuyasha's group gets a hold of the ambassider. good job...
Wow. I definitely didn't expect Kikyou to be behind all the suffering that Kagome had to endure. When will they learn of her treachery? Will Sesshou ever apologize to Kagome? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
What was the promise that Kagome made to Shippou? And when will Sesshou suck it up and apologize to Kagome? I really hope that Inuyasha and the others catch up to the convoy. Keep up the good work and updates soon :P
It is about damn time Kagome got out of that cell. I wonder how Sesshou is holding up? And I can't believe Kagome is soo calm and collected after everything that's happened to her. I would be freaking out if I was her.
Okay I've really loved this story so far, but somehow this chapter just didn't sit right with me. Sesshomaru and Touga have just put Kagome through intense horrific torture and she just gets up and is like oh its okay lalalalala. Okay maybe thats an exageration, but I just, I don't know ,wanted more emotion from her. But in anycase I love your writing and adore this story update soon :).
Finally! It's about damn time that someone has gotten info that will end Kagome's torture. I wonder how much will change between Kagome and Sesshou and Toga once the truth gets out? Will she ever be able to forgive them? Keep up the good work and update very very soon! :P
wow, good chapter...it is well done...i can't wait to see what happens next...
good job and update soon
Kristin (Chapter 18) - Sun 22 Nov 2009
I really like your fic! It's so sad whats happening between Kagome and Sesshomaru, but the truth is going to come out in the next chapter and I cannot wait!!!
Hi,
I like this story. It is really sad that Kagome has to go through all this. I can't wait to see what Kagura has to say and what will happen next.
good job and update soon....
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