I've got to say that I was almost in tears at the end of this chappie... I can't believe how thickheaded Sesshou and Toga can be about pointing fingers at possible traitors. I really do wonder what Sesshou will do once Kagura arrives with news that Kagome is innocent. Will Kagome and Sesshou's relationship ever be the same? Can Kagome allow herself to let things be as they were before before all this madness started? I sooo hope Sesshou understands the gravity of what he's done... I wonder how he'll ever make it up to her and get her to forgive him... Keep up the good work and update sooon cuz I really want Kagome out of that dungeon.
Also, will Kagome be able to still do her job even after all that she has been forced to endure?
Adriana (Chapter 16) - Sat 12 Sep 2009
omg! these last few chapters have kept me on the edge of my seat. and Sesshoumaru being broken and torturing Kagome made me cry. :( update soon! i need to know what happenes when he learns that kagome isn't a traitor!
THsi story, quite frankly is AWESOME!!!! :D Write again soon!
ddt73 (Chapter 15) - Sun 23 Aug 2009
Poor Kagome being tortured. So her parents were traitors, and she's taking the fall for it. I thought maybe her parents were being framed too.
Was a sad chapter, hopefully things get better soon.
Keep up the good work Hair. :)
I love this story! It is so beautifully written. Thanks for the great read!
I am greatly disappointed with Sesshou and his father since they are the ones who will not listen to reason. I agree with Inuyasha about how it's wrong of them to torture someone who has never waivered in her loyalty to the west. I wonder if Kagome's opinion of Toga and Sesshou will change after this mess is dealth with... Will she be able to go about things as if everything is alright? I look forward to seeing what happens when Kagura brings them word about how Kagome had no part in the East's plot against the West. Keep up the good work and please update soon :P
Another heart aching chapter. Kagura was the only one to survive? Wow. I really hope Kagome's ok. And dumb dumb Sesshoumaru. Kagome wouldn't betray you! *sigh* Wonderful work as always. I love how you write. Your writing style really makes a story flow, like brownie sundaes. Till next time ^^
Love it so far! Good job
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Why did u have to stop there? IT was getting soo intense and very good. I wonder what other tools Bankotsu keeps in his torture kit? How much torture is required to prove that Kagome holds no secrets? How will Toga and Sesshou feel when they realize that Kagome is innocent? How will Sesshou's and Kagome's personal relationship change once she is proved innocent? Keep up the good work and update very soon :P
Anamika (Chapter 4) - Tue 02 Dec 2008
KAgs could see the assasin and toga couldn't. Thats degrading for the lord even if he's a lord. Nonetheless, its exciting to read. And you first mentioned Mukotsu as the accomplice then Mutsuhito. I am kind of confused??? Anyways awaiting your next update.
Possessed (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Oct 2008
The mystery darkens and deepens... I'm enjoying this, and await the update eagerly!
Kori (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Sep 2008
Okay, I'm going backwards. >Yaaayy!!! Okay I gotta go back to the other chapters before this one. Baaddd mee. Hehee. ^^
Kori (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Sep 2008
Oops, part of my review got cut off. F-ing hell...Anyway, the answer was Rin. Kaayyy.
Maeriana (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Sep 2008
I'm just taking a random guess, so yeah. I think it was Hiten who is being tortured.
Possessed (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Sep 2008
Good descriptions and well done on the action! I like how the story unfolds. Good reading!
Possessed (Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
I'm liking this story a lot! Now stay out of chat and write the next chapter! We're all waiting...
Eddward (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Aug 2008
Sup Hairann! First off, you have awesome stories. This new one promises to be interesting, even if I don't know anything about 24. 'Invisable Divine help' translates into Myoga! Woot! Which soo fits into his character. Well my dear, I look foward to the next chapter you will grace us readers and fans with. Ta ta!
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