Keep it coming.
I like this story:) You write very well and it makes your story come to life
Very well done. xD Including with Hayame. My character Hayame! xDBut yes, I liked this chapter. Even though I'm your beta and already know what it is. xD /shot
~~Final chapter today?? How cruel and unusual...T__T This fic, so far, is one of my favorites! It's honestly probably one of the only times that I like all of the OC characters and they all have real and distinguishable personalities! Despite how sad it makes me when I read how well Chi and Sesshy get along I just remind myself that it's a Kag x Sessh fic and I feel better...lol that and they're pack, so it's understandable. ^_^ Please update soon! I'll be most delighted if you do!
All seven chapters are great, keep it coming, Happy New Year!
The story is verygood but it appears that your missing a chapter. When did Chiyoko's group come across Inuyasha group again? At the end of chapter 4 Sesshomaru was disparaging Inuyasha for losing a fight to a female and Chiyoko and Co. is nowhere in the area.
Love it! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
-Forgotten!
I love it! Great story!!!! Keep it up! :-)
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
-Forgotten
Love this story!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
I completely adore this, please please please update soon, I honestly cannot wait to read more!
Interesting! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
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