Reviews for Dearly Beloved by Aviel

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Tiffany Gurley (Chapter 43) - Sat 26 Jan 2013

MissKatt (Chapter 43) - Sat 26 Jan 2013

Awweweee that's so cute (:


MissKatt (Chapter 41) - Sat 26 Jan 2013

Aww (: yay!


MissKatt (Chapter 40) - Sat 26 Jan 2013

Yay! I'm excited for the lemon! I'll have to keep a look out!


MissKatt (Chapter 39) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

It takes practread to write smut lol it also helps to read a lot of smut to get the feel for it. It's super embarrassing at first, well, at least it was for me lol! Don't give up on it, though! Just try writing a small scene on a word, not to necessarily post it, but just to get comfortable and play with words ;)

awesome chapter by the way!


MissKatt (Chapter 38) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

Awww that's so sweet :)


Kneazles (Chapter 38) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

I never considered it, but I could easily see Sesshomaru acting much like Hachiko, loyal until the end. Thank you for participating in the Dog Movie Challenge.

 

Very nice story overall, I love the various snippets from Sesshomaru's point of view.


Andrea (Chapter 39) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

If you are not wanting to include any lemons/limes, then you shouldn't! I am enjoying the story regardless :) Subtle hints are enough for me!


Luna C. (Chapter 37) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

Aww Sesshomaru is so patient!


Andrea (Chapter 37) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

Oh poor Kagome and Sesshomaru :(


MissKatt (Chapter 37) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

Awww, I feel bad for Sesshou-kun :(


MissKatt (Chapter 36) - Sat 19 Jan 2013

Awe :( 


MissKatt (Chapter 35) - Fri 18 Jan 2013

I hope she gets better from now on (:


MissKatt (Chapter 34) - Fri 18 Jan 2013

Aww :( so sad :(


Andrea (Chapter 35) - Fri 18 Jan 2013

AWW Kagome :( <3


Luna C. (Chapter 33) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Omg she lost the baby! That is so sad, almost made me bust out in tears. :(


Andrea (Chapter 33) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

AW :( My heart broke.


MissKatt (Chapter 33) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

So sad T^T


see03 (Chapter 31) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Okay! Read the story in its entirety! Only took me 45 minutes? Hehe.

This story is really interesting. I love drabbles, because you can read through them so quickly, but there's also something interesting about capturing a moment in as few words as possible. The beginning of the story seemed like you were going along with just simple one-shot stuff, part of a bigger picture, but in the last dozen or so chapters, I could see a definite plot surrounding their life.

I hope Kagome gets better fast, and they live happily ever after, heh!


Sara Aida (Chapter 31) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

I would just like to say that I am an anonymous reader and have been reading in such a state for YEARS and not just at dokuga. I highly appreciate that you did not disable the option for me  I not only enjoy reading fanfiction, it's my personal haven. I work two jobs and go to college full time so i undoubtedly get stressed. Reading such well written and poeticly designed pieces of material like yours and other authors helps me keep my sanity. I enjoy being unoffical on my reading sites, not to be rude, but inn way to keep the happiness i get from reading as my own little private joy. To keep it as my own. So please even if u decide to later disable the option, dont quit writting, it not only makes you happy, but others as well. And happiness is fleeting. Thank You for your hard work and passion for writting.


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