LOVED YOUR STORY! Please tell me you'll continue this, so many directions you can go from here. For this being your first story you've done an awsome job. My first fic was not good, yours is. I'll keep an eye out for anything else you may write, I'm sure I'll love them as well.
I know this is supposed to be a one shot, but I really hope you continue this story.
OK I knew it was Sesshomaru on the beach but I love how Kagome didn't figure it out until she heard Inuyasha call him by name and it was totally awesome how you ended this story.
Oh I liked this oneshot. I can see myself reading it repeatedly for a while. Thank you for your story!
Great one shot, Happy New Year!
This has got to be one of the best oneshot's I've ever read! PLEASE write a sequel!!!
Omg!That was so good, you add an part two to that ^_^
Noooooooo..............sequel perhaps??? Too good to be a one shot..............cherry and whip cream on top?
kathryn (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Jan 2013
really great one shot loved it
a one-shot? ur kidding me, right? u can end it there!! we gotta know what happens next!
Sheila (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Jan 2013
You can't let it end there!! This was absolutely awesome...more please.
Mimi (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Jan 2013
WOW THIS IS A GREAT STORY !!!! You make it longer you got the writing skills !!!! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS !!!!
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