I just started reading this story, and I have to say, it's completely awesome. You are doing an amazingly good job with the characters. The plot line is excellent, and the flow smooth and mesmerizing. This is so beautifully written, and worded that I find myself completely lost in the story. Great job. I look forward to your next update.
OMG! OMMDG! Iloved this chapter!
I never, in any of the many fics of this pairing I saw Sesshoumaru portrayed this way, never! And I loved it so much,, but at the same time my heart broke for him too, ya know? Cause his person is based on his morals and honor that put him above everyone, human and demons, and to him see that... that he is no better than anyone was a chock, a punch in his face that really brought him down, emotionally, so now I really want to read how the "moving on" process of this it is going to be, so I am curios and very very happy to had found this fic (:
Such a good chapter. The actions spoke so loud. Can't wait for more.
Well, he deserved the wake up call! Finally, she managed to knock some sense into his stubborn head. Truthfully, I believe he is really angry at his father not Inuyasha or Izayoi. When it comes down to it, his father chose to leave and protect his younger son instead of staying with Sesshoumaru and his mother. I don't think he realizes that, but it's the true source of all this bitterness he harbors. He is a hypocrite who hides behind excuses and refuses to admit that he loved his father and was simply broken when he died.
Amazing chapter! I'm so looking forward to the next one ^^
nicole (Chapter 3) - Tue 29 Jan 2013
WOW totally loving this story!!! I must say I really enjoy stories where Kagome is mature and has a wisdom about her. I can't wait to see where you go with your story. I look forward to each new chapter!! Thank you for sharing your story
Stina
perfect, serious!
your style of writing it's very good, the kind of one that I really love to read so give me more to read because I loving :D:D
Oh, girl this is excellent! I love your portrayal of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru here. She's the light to his darkness in this fic. He should reflect on his words and actions because they are indeed contradicting.
Loved both chapters.! Can't wait for the next one ^^
Great chapter! Sesshoumaru can be quite a jerk at times! I love when Kagome tells him like it is! Update again soon!
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