I think you should develop her getting a short training on how to use her powers and her acceptance at the fortress but the story line is good!
Please continue, it's an interesting story and I can't wait to meet kagomes dad but I wanted to ask, when you said four cardinal lords were shocked and angered by kagomes presence at the meeting then when will we meet him an is he not a cardinal lord?
Mona (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 Jan 2017
Finally!
Please update soon.
tonya (Chapter 6) - Tue 12 Apr 2016
i am so glad that you updated!
I just found your story and read it through very interested in where you go with it.
jesica (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 May 2015
Cant wait for more chapters please update soon I love this story
Mo (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 May 2015
Sweet, I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
I loved it cant wait for the next chapter.
jesica (Chapter 4) - Thu 26 Feb 2015
I love this story I cant wait for more chapters
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
tonya (Chapter 4) - Thu 11 Sep 2014
loved this chapter!
rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 11 Sep 2014
next chapter please
Enjoying what you've done so far! Please update soon as I really want to know what happens next!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON.
tonya (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Feb 2014
loving this story! cant wait till the next update
anonymous (Chapter 2) - Sun 16 Jun 2013
Hi I'm anonymous I review to only the best fanfiction and let me tell you that you're brilliant I hate inuyasha for abusing kagome but what fluffy said was really sweet can't wait to see the next one!
I think that he likes her more than a friend and just hasn't realized it yet.
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