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Love your story!! I hope to see you update more soon!!

I can't wait to see the showdown between the two brothers! I hope everything turns out alright for Kagome and Sesshomaru in the end!

Geez, I can't believe how everything is turning out. So much drama is going to come up. I wonder how they will all feel. Great job :)

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Wow, great writing!  I am blown away by this chapter.  I truly felt like I was there.  Vividly drawn characters.  Great interaction between Jaken and InuYasha.  Even better than the last chapter.  I can tell you are getting more comfortable with writing in English, your writing in this chapter is masterful.

I think this chapter had the best writing style of the story thusfar, it was full of rich descriptions.  Jaken's visit to the fishing town and questioning of the fisherman seemed a perfect balance between painting a picture and moving the story along, I very much admired that section particularly.  Toward the very end of the chapter, there was an abrupt change from Jaken's point of view, Lord Sesshomaru's and then a scene through Kagome's eyes.  It causes a slight amount of difficulty for the reader, making that transition.  I have tried to deal with that in my long story, "Double Vision", not very successfully.  Sometimes I end up with very short, choppy chapters in a vain attempt to avoid jumping from one point of view to another.  Still, I found this the most engaging chapter, because of the amount of description and the quality of writing.  It made me feel like I was there.  Great job!

Jaken and Kagome parted on good terms in this chapter, maybe I was wrong to think Jaken was the weak link that was going to bring InuYasha's wrath down on Kagome and her pups.  But Jaken is a jealous character, and jealousy causes as much trouble as lying, and we've seen all the harm that has caused.  Half the fun of reading is second guessing the plot line. 

Hmmm, Sesshomaru says that InuYasha cannot find Kagome.  I was thinking about this, how is he foing to find Kagome, and then I thought, oh, that little toad, Jaken!  He is still lurking arouind, I bet he is going to cause trouble!

Once you start lying, it's very hard to stop, Kagome!  Now your world is built on a foundation of lies.  Who hasn't lied though?  Anyone who claims they haven't, is lying... 

OMG, Kagome can't be dead, can she?  In spite of my shock, I have to tell you this is a beautifully written chapter, with some wonderful descriptions. 

I can't believe Inuyasha can still be so cruel. I do hope Rin does not forgive Sesshoumaru and Kagome so easily. THis is all their faults. They should have thought about her long ago. Instead they have been happy while Rin has been suffering. Not fair at all. Good though :)

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Oh boy look out Inuyasha. Big brother is on his way and is gonna give you an ass beating! I can't believe how cruel Inuyasha is being though. He could at least let Rin have her baby other than feeding time! How heartless! You're gonna get yours Inuyasha!

Much much better! This chapter didn't make me want to cry myself to sleep in the corner! Lol.  <3 <3

honestly this story is getting harder and harder to read. I hope you bring it full circle soon or I wont be able to finish it.

I don't get it. Why doesn't Inuyasha just go after Sesshomaru himself? And what is up with him all of a sudden trying to keep the baby from Rin? Is he on another of his nutty episodes again or something? I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Geez what a pain in the but!!!! Sesshoumaru and Kagome needs to get to them as ASAP. I think Inuyasha does need to die. Him taking her baby away does not fly with me. Great Job :)