This one is missing something. The story is not appear to be complete. I like your stories, simple and to the point.
That was really cute...I thoroughly enjoyed it!!
A Friend (Chapter 5) - Tue 12 Mar 2013
all your stories are good.... i like your writing style! It would be even better if you made it longer and added more details... keep writing, i look forward to reading your new stories.
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