again a great update thank you.
Irish Lass gave up at chap 20. I'm giving up on this chapter. Too many people to keep up with and from crossovers I know nothing about so it leaves me confused. I was hoping for a warm, slow romantic story with Sess/Kag. With all these people, how can they have any time together? Your other readers are probably familiar with all these outside characters and will enjoy all the action and very little romance, but I'm too frustrated to continue any further.
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
still loving it.
ITS SO AMAZING IM IN TEARS!!!!
thanks for the update loved as always.
finally they know how the other feels :)
L O V E D it.
Even as an English speaker I have problems 'spelling' lol. Just thought I would correct myself. =)
I really like this story. I do not often read crossovers but this is entertaining. I have said before that you're apelling and grammar is off but since English isn't your first language it is understandable. Have you thought of trying to find a beta? I think this would help the story but it could also help you when you read back through it and see what the grammar check is missing. Alot of it is the past and present tense of a word or a verb tense that is incorrect. I don't want you to be discouraged though, this is a wonderful story. <3
Keep it coming.
You said to criticize so you can acknowledge what you are doing wrong. Here goes: your grammar and spelling are a bit off. So can you please use a spell check program before you post your chapter. Also I think that you are confusing yourself when it comes to Sesshomaru, so it confuses me, the reader, then there is the inconsistency of flickering ( for lack of a better word) between your tenses or not using the correct tense at all. So I'm not trying to be mean but just wanted to bring your attention to these few things.
loved the updates
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