This was a very awkward read to tell you the truth. For one thing, I encourage you to seek help from a beta, and I found most of Kagome's dialouge during the errotica to be awkward and painful to read. Although, I do enjoy a dominating Sesshomaru. He be a smexy man ;)
I liked it
Sarah (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 May 2013
| I really liked your story but there's one thing I'm a little confused about when she asks him for him help on an assignment he automatically says teachers and students can't fornicate on school grounds but why did he just assume she was talking about sex because she never said anything sexy or try to seduce him and they really did have an assignment due, I just can't see how he would basically say ok but we have to have sex at my place without thinking instead she really does need help
Shaneka (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 May 2013
This story is so awesome keep up the good work. I look forward to your future fanfics.
erika (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 May 2013
I really hope you add more to this story and/or continue on....please that was a hot sex scene loved it and i need more...update soon
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