Keep it coming.
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
Lemons aren't a necessary evil.... just watch the numerous author's notes... they can break up the 'flow' of the story. It is a good tale so far. I'm hoping Sesshoumaru gets knocked down a couple of pegs when he realizes that he doesn't know as much as he thinks he does.
Looking forward to more!
I wonder why he just left like that?
I like it, I find the fact that you had her making him question his own motives really cool. I can't wait for more. Thank you for your story
Stina
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
You and I have something in common, we are both writing our first fan-fiction. Your story is not stupid and the descriptions are just fine. Keep going your writing will improve tremendously. I think you did a wonderful job with your first chapter!
Midian (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 May 2013
Your doing good, keep it up and bring the smut :)
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