Another great update. Im happy to know Sesshoumaru had spies around. He is being prepared, good for him. Lets hope there plans for there future go well. :)
Denise (Chapter 55) - Wed 27 Nov 2013
Great update. I feel a bit bad for Seira, but she deserves it for what she did to Kagoma and Sesshoumaru. Lets hope nothing happens to the happy couple anytime soon. :)
Shaneka (Chapter 58) - Mon 25 Nov 2013
Wonderful update, waiting for the next update.
Caera (Chapter 58) - Mon 25 Nov 2013
Hooray!!! The chapter like the rest of them is always amazing! Keep up the good work and I hope your creativity continues.
aww. after so many hot lemons now we have stroking shaft one liners hehehe
I feel bad for seira. but they are bad guys.
Shaneka (Chapter 57) - Mon 25 Nov 2013
The last two chapters were excellent, waiting with anticipation for the next chapter.
wow. this is new.
their kid is weirded than aliens hehehehe
Caera (Chapter 57) - Sat 23 Nov 2013
Great chapter!
Definitely no split to an alternate universe where humans do not survive. If you did that then you've made it so the bad guys won. The writer's block has come in because you gave the bad guys too much of an upper hand and have made it almost too difficult for our heroes to over come. Too much angst can be detrimental to the characters.
I have a few ideas to help if you want to hear them.
Sesshomaru mom and her pips should die and it should be a lesson to everthing to not mess with Sesshomaru and Kagome and they should survive into the future of Kagome’s time, keep it coming.
I think that Sess' mother and her little regime should all be taken out and that they should be made to realize that they should never have crossed Sesshoumaru. She should be full of regret before she dies. Also, I think Sess/Kag along with their family should survive into the future and with their knowledge of things to come be on top a.k.a. a wealthy and powerful family. Kagome needs to see her family again.
This has been an excellent story thus far even though I have not reviewed each chapter. I am enjoying reading your latest story. You really know how to throw in the unexpected twists and turns. Great job!
Shaneka (Chapter 55) - Sun 10 Nov 2013
Excellent update, keep it coming.
Seira go what she deserved, I'm just waiting for Harumi to get hers. Great chapter, keep it coming.
Denise (Chapter 54) - Mon 04 Nov 2013
I am happy they talked about what they felt. Now everything is in the opened aand it makes them a better couple. Lets hope they find shippo all well. :)
Eliona (Chapter 54) - Mon 04 Nov 2013
Nice retouch of the feels :3 yay ~
Another amazing, keep it coming.
Caera (Chapter 54) - Sun 03 Nov 2013
Another amazing chapter!
Love the intensity depicted here... tragedy makes me so glad (evil laugh)
Denise (Chapter 53) - Fri 01 Nov 2013
O men, how the future is going to change. Knowing Kagome, she won't back down without a fight. She has a big family to take care off. Great update :D
Denise (Chapter 52) - Fri 01 Nov 2013
Great chapter.I am so happy they are a happy family right now, but for how long.... :)
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