Very good story. As always kinky no seems to be trouble. Hopefully kagome will get her act together.
next chapter please
Hmmm... I really have to say that the story is too fast, Kagome and Sesshoumaru both OOC and I don't know, OC Mary Sue? Not bashing or anything but Kagome would never let anyone belittle her worth that hard. In fact, she is quite defiant and determined not to be in Kikyo's shadow so her backing down and letting someone else finish him is preposterous at least nor is Sesshoumaru easy to fall in love. And as I said, your OC is a Mary Sue that she just had to finish off their enemy out of nowhere.
Edit: The ? in the names is supposed to be the o with a - over it in Kikyou and in Shinidamachu it's an u with -, seems editor can't handle it.
Just a small note, Kiky?s "soul collectors" are called Shinidamach? ("Dead Soul Insect"), not "Shinigami" ("Death God"). Shinigami is the japanese equalent of the Grim Reaper.
Aren't geta shoes? Am I mistaken, or did you perhaps mean that it was kata that Sparrow slipped into in her dojo? Other than that bit of confusion, thank you for providing us with two more great chapters with which to entertain ourselves!
OMG, i love that you updated your story and I am in love with Sparrow!!!!! I so cannot wait to read more about her!!!!!
Love this story!! You're a great writer and I can't wait for more!!
excellent
Nice, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.Happy Mother's Day!
great chapter! looking forward to what happens next.
Loving it, keep it coming.
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