This has to be one of the most interesting and intriguing fics I read in quite a while. I just love it. I don't think I've ever even heard of a storyline like this and poor Kagome is stuck in the middle because she is just so sweet, kind, loving, and giving. She'd die first before abandoning a person, be it child or adult, that's in great need.
I like the flow and I'm even enjoying the first person prospective, added with the present tense of writing. You are doing a wonderful job and I have got A LOT of fics to catch up on and here I am adding another. Your summary just drew me in. Dang, I'm just too curious. JEN
More, keep it coming.
Such chaos, but luckily they both founded the strength and power to cleanse the land. Kagome must be very fatigued to have fallen into unconsciousness like that.
rose (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Oct 2013
next chapter please
so instead of purifying darkness, they activated a nuke which turns the village into flowers? darn.
I have just finished reading all the chapters back to back and I really enjoyed the story. I must say that I am impressed with your ability of writing in the first person very adequately. Keep up the great writing! And please do enjoy your vacation! lol!
now im confused....may choji... darn i need to re-read? rats.
Nice, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 14) - Fri 04 Oct 2013
next chapter please
hehe thanks for the update.
we still dont know who is the bad guy.
is it generic inu guard A?
Liking all, keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 13) - Thu 03 Oct 2013
next chapter please
aww rats. this is all jibberish to me T_T
rose (Chapter 12) - Thu 03 Oct 2013
next chapter please
awwww. is the angst already over? will there be only fluff left? :(
rose (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2013
next chapter please
Poor poor generic inu youkai A :D they get beat up by the main girl protagonist, and now they will get beat up by the main guy protagonist.
Oh dont get me wrong. i love beating up generic characters.
More, keep it coming.
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