I cannot tell you how happy I am that you finally decided to write a drabble. It was amazing, had a slice of everything - action, drama, romance, humor, angst, ehem, smut... All in all, a very satisfying read with eveything I could ask for in cute little snippets of lovely worded sentences!!
You portrayed your characters with such maturity, yet they still had moments where they were vulnerbale, scared, angry, jealous, smitten without losing that touch of 'adult', that flavor of man and woman. And you have a talent for creating engaging OC's with tragic pasts that make you wanna root for them and hate them at the same time!
This was a very emotional journey. It started out with a punch in the gut, the loss of Rin, how it affected both Sesshomaru and Kagome, but also brought them together, made them open up, share their pain with each other. It was sublime! You never rushed it or cheapened like many usually do.
THE SMUT WAS HOT. I mean, seriously...how you do that in 100 word snippets?! Teach me!!
I envy your word choice at certain parts; it flows so beautifully, strings of lovely words painting images, even emotions. You give color to emotions! That is a gift!
I loved the bittersweet tones near the end, giving them time to settle their feelings, then bringing them together in such a sweet, romantic way. *sighs*
Thank you so much for writing this gem!! It'll be forever in my favorites!
Ana (Chapter 337) - Sun 14 Sep 2014
Well, the lemon was amazing *-* But that I never doubt it! *-*
But I’m a bit disappointed with the end. I mean, he left her alone for so long. I was hoping a bit more of a fight from her. I got the feeling that she “gave up” to easy. She could have demanded an explanation, one chapter to make him suffer a bit xD
Never the less, this was perfect. Loved every second of it *-* Thank you darling, so much for charring it with us! <3 <3 <3
Good chapters, keep it coming
Ana (Chapter 301) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
Uhuhuhuhu >.< that's bond to be a very intresting conversation
Thank you for the update <3
Ana (Chapter 284) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
I feel loke slapping him --"
KEdakumi (Chapter 301) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
Ooooo...I do believe it's getting ready to hit the fan. Can't wait!
Nicole (Chapter 301) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
Chuckle
That ought to be an interesting conversation...
Nicole (Chapter 283) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
Way to put your foot in it Sesshomaru...
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