So what is their relationship? Is it that of a girlfriend and boyfriend or of that of a lord and his mistress (I ask that because she called him her lord). Why does he get like this? Why does Kagome not want to comply with what he tells her to but loves him while their in bed?
I'm interested to see where this heads.
I read both your chapters, the second was very intense. I have never written a lemon before and I always find myself admiring those who can write good ones. You have done a good job.
But the review is not only reason I am here, I am new around here and have still not figured out how to post fanfictions as you have done. can you please tell me how? I wrote to a lot of members, but only one replied and she did not how to either. Could you help me out?
rose (Chapter 2) - Wed 23 Oct 2013
next chapter please
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Hrmmmm...how curious this story seems to be. I can't wait to read more of it. I am simply enthralled. Please update soon. ^_^
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