You really can't tell what's going on in this chapter. There is no indication as to when the scene changes so everything doesn't flow right. 

I'm confused and intregued and I like it!!!

That was great!! So entertaining to read! Love it. Can't wait for more.! 

More, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother

OMG I totally love this story. Please continue. 

OMG HE GOT HIS HASS HANDED TO HIM!!!! ROFL porr porr sesshy i want to see how he take having his  stick pulled out XD i cant wait for more to read

can  the wolve be any more dummer or is there since of smell just that poor 

A lenient chapter as opposed to the previous ones.. Kagome is turning out to be quite a snob.. Mekel on the other hand is a laugh! :D And the pop-up of Naruto at the end.. What a mash-up!! Keep it coming!

Entertaining chapter, very relatable! Though I would have liked to know the details of Kagome's change.. (something anything to push the image Bella's change in Twilight out of my head!! **cringe** ). Raizol is turning out to be the ideal older brother (cliché much?) The Sycon history is quite avant-garde-ish, quite original!! Good work, keep it up!

Okay i've only just joined this site a week back & this is my first review. Before i begin, i have to mention i have not yet read Inuyasha, from where the characters have supposedly been spun, so my opinions may be frivolous :) I really like the entire set-up of different species co-habiting together, as it reminds me of star-trek/starwars. The story seems to be heading to a interesting start.. Let's read on further!! ????

Your welcome kalaadaephon, nice chapter. Keep it coming

Nice, more please quickly, keep it coming

Liking both chapters, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

I really like it so far, very original, that's for sure! I'd like to see more, but I'm afraid I'm not very good in the idea department. I suppose, she'll be taken to the Western palace/shiro/castle thing, whatever you're calling it. I'm assuming that the Crone is speaking of Kagome when she says, "the Herald comes" or is it someone else? Well if it is, when she gets to the palace, you could have her sort-of rescue her, saying something along the lines of destiny or something. There could be some kind of, "You're a gril?!" moment, those are always fun. Maybe she'll need a protector, (Sesshomaru, maybe if that's how you wanna go) and then they'll finght evil, fall in love, and have all se bebies! Sorry I can't be of contribute anymore! But I hope this might have helped some!  The story is great, by the way!

Liking it, keep it coming. 

I read and I must say that I find your fic quite interesting and it flows wonderfully.

Thank you kalaadaephon, I appreciate it. Also thank you for explaning why Kagome laugh and for the note at the end. Poor Kagome, keep it coming.

and then what happened?

Great chapter and Mekel is a jerk. Keep it coming.