Just found this story. Ahh... the tension. Love it!
So I started reading this because I wanted a break from studying. Now, almost an hour later, I'm in love and want to read more. I think what I like about this story is the build up of the connection. It's not sudden nor is it taking forever. And the shared desire between them seems not only realistic but right. When I read this, I thought it was wonderful: the descriptions leave me in awe, your characterizations are spot on (seriously- they're amazing!), and I can picture the story in my head as though I'm watching it happen.
I think it's safe to say the only thing that bothered me was a word in Chapter 3 "slided" should be slid (in reference to doors being opened). Beyond that, I think it's safe to say, you can probably expect me to read more of this as soon as you update :)
Akita (Chapter 5) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
woo...that was one sexy chapter. This is a good story.
"His thoughts were centered around one thing. He’d dry humped her, like a randy animal" - this made me laugh so much.
Awesome chapter, amazing writing and I'm eagerly anticipating what will happen next.
Let the games begin Kagome, Sesshoumaru is on the hunt.
JetStick (Chapter 5) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
I can feel an angsty complication coming up >_____________<
ai yaaaaaaa can't wait!!
Liv (Chapter 5) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
Wow!! Super beautiful and intense story! I absolutely love the detailed yearning that they are both experiencing, especially on Sesshoumaru's part. Please update as soon as possible! I look forward to finding out how this amazing love story ends ^_^
Allie (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Sep 2014
Pleaaaaase update soon! Super good!
Caitie (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Sep 2014
yet again i am in love with another one of your stories they are fantastic. please keep up the amazing work! update soon!
thank you for updating!!!!
Sesshomaru is trying so hard to fight it but he won't be able to last lol
Cannot wait to see if the rest of the gang ends up in your story too! Although, I am concerned that his advisor may unintentionally give out private and personal information and cause more mischief and trouble
xDori (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Sep 2014
I'm in love yet again with one of your stories... well... I love all of it actually. Keep going! I can't wait for the drama and feels to unravel.
KB (Chapter 3) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
This is just FANTASTIC!!!!!! Please, please keep going!!! You have created an avid new fan. Congratulations for processing such lovely, creative talent!
Blessings,
KB
Riri-nyan (Chapter 3) - Thu 21 Aug 2014
Ahhh! I just recently jumped over from FFnet to dokuga, this is the first story i've read! Im really anxious to find out what happens next, please keep up the splendid job! ^___^
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