holy shit. i... so did not expect that ending! woo!

What...the hell?

You are an utter troll, lol. 

I'm still chuckling while dragging a hand down my face muttering, "Jesus F-ing Chr..." Ya know, I should have known you were the author on this one. Some of your stuff is way too dark for me, but this one just about had me busting out laughing. (It's that shock value...) Ha!

As for the rest of the critics' complaints, ah well. Whine and move on, I say. To each his own. Dark, yep. But hilarious. In it's own twisted way. Two thumbs up :)

oh my  O.O

so bad!  >.<

XD

Really? i give up! i know when i click on one of your stories it's gonna be really weird or horrific but for some reason i can't help myself! i swear your wonderfully demented. you must be one of those people who are really nice and cute and person but your all dark and scary inside. you write brilliantly though so it's all good!

that was sssssoooo not what i had in mind when he joined her for watermelon, nice story by the way

Holy gut check. This isn't the first time I've read this one shot and I have to say I was intrigued that though I knew the ending I still got that smack in the face surprised sensation. It's just so.. wonderfully dark. In my opinion the fact that this piece ellicited a strong response twice makes it an awesome piece of fanfic.

omg so cruel its awesome good job!!!