Excellent as always! And so, this being that is coming intends to make Kagome his wife. I like hoow Sesshomaru isn't having any of that.

Such a unique plot. So wonderfully written. As always, looking forward to more.

More, keep it coming.

I did not realize who the being was until he mentioned "as a father should" or something similar.  Suddenly I allowed a very loud. ..OOOOOOOOOOOOO SHHHH******T to escape my lips in the middle of the locker room hahaha. Another fantastic chapter. Now him...has a name. What a fantastic twist in this already unique plot. Sesshomaru is determined to obtain the object that had captured his eye. I like that. There's evil out there and he's preparing her to face it. There is no telling what will transpire. I also enjoyed the back story revealing Kagome's and, Himself connection.  Looking forward to more. 

Wow , Amazing! I really liked it.  Update soon im curious.  I have to admit I never expected Him, Kauhn, be Kagomes father, its really surprising.

Keep it coming.

 Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great chapter, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Please, update the next chapter soon! I really liked it.

Another great chapter!  I really enjoy this "him" I enjoy how you are able to paint a picture of the creature and Kagome. I love your technique. 

I'm really enjoying this. Such a unique take! Please do continue. 

I adore this chapter. I extremely hate the idea of Kikyo so I'm happy.

Maya Angelou passed away, and Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5.  Nice chapter, keep it coming.

 

Love it

Good, keep it coming.

 

I can't get enough of this story. I love it so much! I hope to read more really soon.

i simple act but it hilarious for me!! :D

but, i don't understand, who is he??? is he naraku? or maybe another character???? my head's hurted because this. @_@

Nice, keep it coming.

 

I love ths story! I can't wait to read more.

God this is good! I love the way you write and how everything just flows together! It's so dark and, urg, I just love this so much! The whole Kagome has eveil inside of her just excites me and then here's Sesshomaru who is normally the evil one, but here his like a good guy. And Kikyo is DEAD! Yes!! Yes, yes, yesss! Just keep it coming, you're amazing!

Great, keep it coming.