Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
Ana (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Jun 2014
This story souds intresting! Lets see how you will develop this! ;)
Thanks for sharing! <3
Your story is really good , its pretty realistic and I can tell you, there Is Nothing childish in it. Update ththe next chapter soon, Please! *_*
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I love your story. It's written very well, the plot, the characterization, everything. The rape scene actually made sense, not just some random event. I like the way you kept Sesshoumaru speaking in third person. Hardly anyone does that anymore. I think you've got the way Kagome feels right on the nail. Thank you for writing such a good story and I can't wait to read more!
tonya (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jun 2014
cant wait for the next update!
Nina (Chapter 3) - Mon 09 Jun 2014
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!!! i rarely review unless im in dire need of an update. this is one of thsoe times!!! GAH
Poor Kagome, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Jun 2014
update soon! you rock!
Rhonda (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Jun 2014
WOW!!!!!
I LOVE!!!!
Hate that InuYasha has done such damage BUT Sesshoumaru will soon help her recover...
Cant' wait for the update...and Thanks again for posting your stories!!
This is interesting. I admit that after reading this I went and hunted down the version on ff.net. I have to say that the first 3 chapters here are way better and I hope the rest follows nicely as well. The ff.net version was confusing and left me with a ton of questions. I managed to get all the way up to the lemon scene with Kagome and Sesshomaru before I quit because I was fed up with all the stuff that didn't make sense.
Anyway, good luck with this rewrite. Like I said before I definitely find this one better then the previous version. :)
Mimiru (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Jun 2014
I can only hope sesshomaru can bring her back to herself.
Great chapter, keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
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