I liked the story and would love to read more. Please write more ^_^
yes, definately continue! I would love to see a gradual blooming relationship between to two, or if you would like to keep it dark, at least very steamy lemons...
If you decide to continue, my question would be, 'where's Inuyasha?' For this one-shot, Inuyasha's presence wasn't needed or wasn't a necessity...but one does wonder about where and what happened to him. A backround story is appreciated to sate your reader's curiosity! ;)
Thx~
this was dark, but i feel like you need to give a warning that this is a rape fic. the way your summary sounds dosnt make it sound like a rape fic, this couls be very traumatizing to someone who reads it unknowingly. while well writen, it needs a warning
I liked it a lot, a little dark, boviously, but that was the angle. You had a few spelling errors, but nothing too noticable. I would love a continuation!
Koi (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014
This was soooo good! I would love to know what happens to Kagome future wise! Great job on bringing Sesshy's true demonic self out. I hope you make a sequel?
Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered on tv, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
would really like a follow up to this
Sarah (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014
Yes love it please continue
Wow!!! I really loved this one. I definitely think it should be continued. I agree that it is great to show Sesshoumaru's demonic nature.
I really enjoyed your descriptions of his descent into obsession and insanty. Poor Kagome, I hope she doesn't fall in love with him after all he is a rapist. God knows I hate the stories of Kagome accepting rape, something tells me though Sesshoumaru is satisfied with her body now but will probably be asking for more and she won't give it. I look forward to that, anyway I enjoyed this entry and hope to read more.
I also love it when seahoumaru shows his dark side. Sadly fics like this rarely are finished..and sometimes left hanging.
Mina (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014
Hello! Fantastic story! There were minor grammatical errors, but they really didn't take away from the heart of the story. This was a good piece that conveyed what you wanted to show: His Royal Highness' demonic nature. I would love to see a second installment.
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