I didn't know what to think about Sesshomaru getting the short end of the stick, but I love where you left off on the last chapter. Though I feel really bad for Miroku...wahh.
I love your writing style and how full and rounded your story is. Its enjoyable to read and am very much looking forward to the next chapter and I hope and hope that you will keep going :( :) It seems that for whatever reason the writters with the best, interesting to read stories seem to disappear and I hope that you are able to continue this story.
You are a great writter!
katie (Chapter 8) - Mon 01 Dec 2014
That is so good please keep going. I would like to know how inuyasha going to take this? Please up date as fast as u can. I do like sess and kagome pares cose they are never the same.
Ahh ahh soo much debauchery. Heh heh
Rhonda (Chapter 7) - Sun 28 Sep 2014
Even though there is some cringe worthy moments this does show how utterly perverse Naraku is.....Love the story!!
Lovin' it even more with Inuyasha and Mirouku on the scene. Here's to our heroes!
So that's where those two were. I was starting to wonder if they had been caught as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Koi (Chapter 6) - Tue 23 Sep 2014
This was really good exactly. You just (as you know) need to get a beta so that way they can help you fix your grammical and spelling errors. I like everything except for Sesshy getting raped. I love the sango and Koga scene. He mated her...lol
Mimiru (Chapter 5) - Sun 21 Sep 2014
Poor sesshomaru, well I hope he manges to kill naraku.
Sally (Chapter 6) - Sun 21 Sep 2014
Liking it. Looking forward to how your going to make it a happy ending.
I don't get it. Where is inuyasha and miroku? Will any of them get free? Can't wait to find out!
Cheryl (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Sep 2014
interesting combination you have here. hope to see more of it soon :)
Mimiru (Chapter 4) - Fri 19 Sep 2014
thought it seems a bit rush, the smutness is nice :3
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