Oh.my.gosh....a purple Jaken caterpillar...:D I was laughing at that. Most people have Jaken punished with a rock to the head or being stepped on. This is great. Can't wait for more!
ROFL Oh my gosh I loved it! Thank you so much. *bow* And congrats on the children and co-writing! Normally it takes quite a while for a group to get somewhere on typing any form of stories because of long distance or work ect.
Oh, I am in LOVE with this!!! The banter is just sooo fun and the creative minds have my complements. JEN
Ree-san (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
I'm really enjoying their correspondence and I'm really looking forward to them actually meeting? Or will their relationship progression be shown through a continuing series of emails? I hope she starts to share on how InuYasha will continue to try and get her back, that certainly would be interesting! It's certainly a different approach to telling their story. Really looking forward to the next update.
Ceysna (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
Yay! Loved the update! Can't wait for Sesshy's reply. And the "suggestion" for Inubaka's help was genius! So much love the this fic! Hopw the week gets better, see ya next chap.
rose (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
next chapter please
love it! maybe she (or shippo:)) should slip some of those remedies to Inu. Just sayin'
I'm liking this.
I love how she recommended to send Inu some 'help'.
Too funny. Can't wait for more!
candy (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
I like it can't wait to read more about this.
I like it . Update soon
hazel (Chapter 4) - Fri 10 Oct 2014
Love your story! I look forward for more chapters soon!
Ceysna (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Oct 2014
I love Sesshy's humor in this. Very nice, and so far no OOC-ness.... perfect!
Ceysna (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Oct 2014
You make her with backbone! Love it!
Hey, welcome back to the writing world. I do hope that the muses return full force. So far I think there is a solid intro in these chapters. I'm still getting my mind around the Sesshoumaru that you are portraying since his words seems to be a bit conflicting, very severe at one point but lighter statements aswell. However, I'm not one to criticize another's version on a character. It's your story and if this is the sesshoumaru that you are going for then cool, he doesn't seem too OOC anyway. I do intend to follow this story so good work so far and keep it up :)
Chie (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Oct 2014
This story is nice and funny so far. I really like the e-mail format you're using to write it in, it's fitting. Both Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's voices are recognisable. So good job!
It's nice to see you back! :)
Ha, i think Inuyasha hasn´t informed Kagome of her status in the pack. I think she thought that she was his girlfriend and not his mate-to-be what Sesshomaru indirectly suggests.
And i think that she will let Sesshomaru know what she thinks of her being a "little Miko".
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Eight Honeymoon?
Man they must be really in love....and have much money and time:p
Really great chapter. Have fun to write the next chapter!
Until then
Silence-Midnight
This is a wonderful way to start a story. I enjoy the banter. Very intelligent and witty. Keep up the good work.
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