Threats aside, wonderful chapter written. Makes me all goose bumpy inside ^.^ The way the characters are built and develop makes the story not rushed and flow naturally. Although I could do with more frequent updates but alas, you are the author here. :D
Hope you update soon, looking forward to how the history and the love progress. Kudos!
Good job!!!!! I love you~ \>,</
kyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They kissed! ohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmy They were KISSING!!!!! it throws me for a loop!! haiaa~ I really hope they would together.
though, I started to lose hope about yamamoto. Want to hate but I can't and it's making me soooo frustated (my feelings and the story). I want yamamoto to have some atonement and be happy, but after think again with the fact he's involving whole worlds and kill so many... But, somehow I think, there were other people beside yamamoto who did those things (like killed, war, etc.). It's just popping in my head. But then, if it's wrong, then... yeah, no prob.
But theeen... I'm happy to whatever you write~ I can't wait for the next chapter~ semangka! ;)
Ah...finally and so satisfying. Sad parting with Inuyasha. Does she get them out of Japan before the bombings? I love the way you have blended this in with the wars. Yamamoto seems unbeatable, but then, so did Hitler. They will overcome. She just needed that confidence boost, which was so lovingly provided. I can barely wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for the update.
Short but beautiful.
Omg! They kiss! And its a big ole kiss too! Yes! Altho girl is gonna crack i think. Sesshy is gonnahave his hands full with both the war and her rollar coaster emotional state i think. But hes up for it. I cant wait to see what this milestone brings him and her. Your writing is, as always, exquisite. I envy your skill. Thanks for the update!
Koree (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015
I'm Bursting w/ Excitement Over Their Kiss !!!! Although The Setting Isn't The Best & Is Really Sad :/ I'm Glad They Found Each Other & Are Able To At Least Have This Moment To Express Hidden Feelings... Amazing Chap !!
A kiss. Finally.
A part of me realizes this as a climatic part of the story; a possible turning point. Yay.
BUT then a part of me can't help but think this is too easy. What's next?
However, I am glad that one of them finally took a step foward. I'm still amazed at your style of writing. You continue to draw me in even when I get mad at the developing character relationships; their decisions, actions or lack of action, their inability to be foward, and so on and so forth.
My point: I love this story.
Can't wait for your next chapter.
hazel (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015
AH!!! Cliffhanger!!! How cruel of you! JK! Hahahahaha! But! Thank you very much for updating! I'm looking forward to your next chapter! Just to let you know I check everyday to see if you have a new chapter! Thats how much I love your story!
Sigh...beautiful and sad. Can't wait to read more.
Nice chapter. So sad that they all deserted her but glad that Sessh showed up. Thanks so much.
Wonderful chapter. I was glad to see Kagome recover some of her strength and start to fight back in her way. Thanks so much.
Loveyaa (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015
You have quite a way with each chapter. I would probably be crushed if I was Kagome, but you do a good job of explaining how she keeps moving and dealing with it all. I am quite excited to see how Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship will change once again, now since their love was too strong to be held back anymore (hehe). I can't wait to see what happens next and maybe another decleration of love from Sesshoumaru by stopping this war early ;)
misstomato (Chapter 16) - Mon 08 Jun 2015
Its so good! please don't let it be a sad ending!
Yay, they kissed! Even if it is on a bloody battlefield. I like how he is her calm in the storm. In order to stay sane in all that is going on for her, no rest, constantly going from one major war to the next.
Can't wait for the next update and see where it is all going.
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