love all the updates! great story!
awesome updates thank you so much.
Oh how i'm loving the frequent updates. I can see how much fun you're having with this story. It's definitely all yours now :) Great work. As badly timed these updates are since i'm swamped in school work and work work, i still sneak away to read them, lol. Can't help it. It's very realistic, with naraku's struggles with fatherhood here and there. I do look forward to reading more from this story. Keep up the great work
love the updates!
great chapter thank you.
so so cute thank you.
I thought he was having a hard time with kagome picking things out. I wonder how he's going to react to souta wanting a kitty.
next chapter please
Good work! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for updating.
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.
great story!
that was great thank you.
Ahhh that last sentes is funny as hell. Please keep going it is getting good
I like it. It's cute and funny.
So far so good. I think I would to follow your story and see how it develops. So far you have me interested. Keep up the good work
I read the story that you gained inspiration from about a year ago. I thoroughly enjoyed it and i could see the resemblance after the first paragraph. That story first opened my mind to the idea of Naraku as the protective older brother/father figure instead of the enemy. Anyways, back to your story, i would love to read another story around the same theme and i'm already seeing how you're making it your own. I'll definitely be looking out for future updates ^_^ Keep up the great work.
so far really like it thanks.
Wow now its getting very good please keep going u got me hooked
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