Also, just cause I saw some of the other reviews, I'm really glad they didn't have sex this chapter. Technically since he is not in the position to consent because he's a slave, every time he's been paid to have sex it's rape. So, I'm glad Kagome insisted they didn't. I was starting to feel a bit uncomfortable, so kudos to her!
I like the flow of the story so far. I like the characterizations you've developed. I rarely enjoy AUs this much.
One thing I'd like to suggest, though, is not having such obvious situations be so hard for the main characters to decifer. I understand Sesshomaru is bound to have rather serious trust issues because of how he's been used in the past, but he still seems to be as intelligent as he is in canon. I had a hard time believing that he wouldn't understand Kagome wanting to be let out as a that she didn't buy him.
But, then again with trust issues that large, it's underdstandable. I just felt it took him a bit long to realize, especially since he can smell fear.
Otherwise, your writing is impeccable. I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015
hai...finally i got the dokuga member! and the first story i want to review so bad for so long is yours!!!
usually when i want review your story i go to fanfiction.net. but now, i just want to review your story here. for the first time i saw your story, i know i will like it. and i really like it alot. hope you can update faster when you have spare time ofcourse. just fighting till the end please. don't give up in the midle of story. i really can't wait what happen next. ganbatte!!
iin (Chapter 8) - Sat 14 Mar 2015
Ough not a lemon...(pout...!) but thanks for your up date... it's oke to slow down the relationship...it's more romantic...
Caedes (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Mar 2015
I LOVE this story! Can't wait until you update!
Guest (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Mar 2015
Oh my gosh, to be with sesshy XD, i feel like i'm dying lol
Guest (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Mar 2015
Oh my gosh, to be with sesshy XD, i feel like i'm dying lol
Mona (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Mar 2015
Ask and you shall receive. I love the latest chapter and can't wait to read more. I am eager to know what they will discuss and the outcome of said conversation.
Mona (Chapter 8) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
Loving this fanfic and can't wait to read more. Please update soon :)
Cool, keep it coming.
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Mar 2015
*le gasp* (faints) such a end to a chapter, this story totally captivates me so please continue writing this fanfic cause i cant get enough of it so update when you can ! >.< ^.^
+_+ more.. It Iz an magnificant story >.> <3
Koree (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Mar 2015
:o OMG Such A Hanger ! Amazing Chap I Want To Say This Is My Fav But I Can Tell The Next Will Be :)
Michela (Chapter 7) - Fri 06 Mar 2015
Noooooo It was too short!!!!
I did enjoy the chapter though... poor Kagome whatever is she to do all alone in a dark room with Sess *snickers*
Update soon =D
Miss C (Chapter 7) - Fri 06 Mar 2015
Not Fair!!! You can't leave me hanging!!!
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