Very enjoyable.

Your writing is so vivid... can picture what is going on just like a show or movie. And thank you for mentioning the tidbit about Youkai. They are not demons in the western sense, but more like the Elves or Fae races of Eupean legend. Spirits of nature.

Really looking forward to more of this promising story.

Thank you.  This is my first try at a fanfic, for an anime I have loved for over 10 years <3

interesting first chapter...hope to read more soon...keep up the good work

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

The very first thing to catch my eye was the summary. Absolutely tantalizingly. I could feel Inu no Taisho's anticipation and Sesshomaru's apprehension. Keep it going, I am now hooked!

This looks like it is going to be interesting! In this chapter, I enjoyed your descriptive language. Great start; I'm looking forward to more! :)