Nice story, Hope you can updat soon. Loving where it is heading!

Very nice chapter. Looking forward to more updates. Good job!

It is a nice beginning to what could be a good story. The word boarder is misspelled, it should be spelled border. Looking forward to future updates.

You should consider getting a beta for your story.

Interesting start so far.  One thing: it's "throne" not "thrown."  Thrown = verb, throne = noun.