please update.
so basically sesshomaru is lowering himself to the same level as the sick fuckers that took rin. and though months have passed, and he has no idea whether or not she is still alive or anything- he's willing to ruin kagome's live and put her in the same situation as rin.
i hope he suffers. really i do.
i hope that if he finds rin, and she realises what he has done to kagome- she hates him just as much as she hates the bastards the so cruelly and ruthlessly stripped her of her innocence.
that aside, please update.
misty (Chapter 2) - Mon 05 Jun 2017
please update, possibly with longer chapters.
Panther (Chapter 2) - Wed 22 Apr 2015
Oooh, I love this idea! The hatred and unwilling desire of Kagome, the merely manipulatie interests of Sesshoumaru, will surely turn into somethying very interesting. Also, a dominant Sesshoumaru is always so sexy! Great job, keep it up! :)
This is pretty interesting. I wonder if he'll tell her what's going on. Update soon!!
Please keep going!
this has really piqued my interest, I think it's a great plot like and good writing style... But bloody hell woman !! Not so short on the chapters ! lol no, seriously, it can become rather annoying, you need to get the balance right. I'd say two or three pages longer on the second chapter and that would be perfect. You write kind of like me, you just want to get it out ! Which isn't a bad thing but then it doesn't draw out the chapters if you don't drawl on about thoughts etc do you get what I mean ? Hell, yours is great without all that extra writing ! But that's how other authors get there chapters long and drawn out. Great job! Love it please update soon x
Here it's so hot, i wonder why XD
Wooooohoooo added
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 Jan 2015
Hahahah What Did He Think she would just Be Ok Naked and Obey him so Funny.
this is kind of like your Avaricious fic, I noticed. you know, the whole sitting-by-a-fire. Your prologue grabbed my attention! I like how this is coming; please update soon!
ooooh! i feel like this might overwhelm me at many points, but I. AM. ENTICED.......I jus feel iffy about rape (SHOULD it occur in this fic). I know many people will say that it's wrong and whatnot in regards to writing fanfics, but i ONLY think that it's wrong if Kagome gets stockholmed and it overshadows the whole story.
if you believe that you should write it, do it, but i want this story to thrive and not be ignored by those aversed to rape in fics.....i truly adore your writing style and i hope others will as well regardless of the contents.
Susy V (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
Oh.... It's getting real! Sessh is really ganna bring the heat! Can't wait to see what else they say to each other, I swear their interaction is always explosive. Can't wait till next chapter!
This is looking VERY interesting! Please post more soon!
Loveyaa (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
Hmm...quite the interesting story. Breaking her just enough to do get what he wants. I wonder if it will work. Why couldn't he just ask for her help and have her pretend she knew all that he will teach her. Hmph. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Koi (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
OMG GIVE ME MORE!!!!!! GIVE IT ME ANOTHER CHAPTER! i need to know what happens next!
Interesting plot. Its definitely different. Can't wait for your next update.
Mimiru (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
OOOOO! you so mean xDD
that was wonderfully sinful, i cant wait for the next chapter :3
Couldn't stop smiling when sesshomaru appeared lol....just wish the chapters were longer...can't wait for next chapter
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