Yey, cant wait for the romance parts XD
I love this story. I laughed so hard at high baby Inuyasha. I also loved it when Miroku ran away from scary Kagome. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more!!!!
Marie (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Apr 2015
I had been waiting for this update. I'm loving kayo me confidence and sesshomaru shedding all that pent up negative energy. Next we hope sessh realizes kagome fixation with him and not miroku. LoL
Marie (Chapter 8) - Tue 07 Apr 2015
Alright. Closeness plus action equals next chapter please :)
silvery (Chapter 8) - Mon 06 Apr 2015
Oooooooohh... I CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
This chapter....OUGHT TO BE DRAWN MANGA STYLE!!!! Glomp Sesshoumaru Kagome!!! GLOMP HIM!!!
This had between such an interesting story. They are a bout OOC, but it's not bad..... I love the interaction.
Can't wait for more!
Geez, sesshy is not a gay. Just prove it to Kagome and all done XD. Btw update as soon as you can, wonder whats going on with inu.
Koree (Chapter 8) - Mon 06 Apr 2015
Just As Sesshomaru Starts To Kinda Accept Kagome , Something Bad Happens :/ Hopefully This Brings Them Closer
No Uta (Chapter 8) - Sun 05 Apr 2015
What a fun chapter this was. I couldn't help but giggle at Kagome's overactive imagination. She's so paranoid and jealous and of Miroku at that. I absolutely lol'd hard when she kept accusing the guy of being his man-lover HAHAHAHAHA! This part here, "Woman, unhand me, what nonsense are you spouting.” I almost spit out my tea. There was a very unexpected turn of events at the end of this chapter. Hmmmm...so now I'm wondering of their former babysitter is who's injured Inuyasha. I'm curious to see how all of that and Touga adruptly leaving in battle gear with his comadres are connected. Great chapter and update.
Laugh so hard for this story XD
No Uta (Chapter 7) - Mon 30 Mar 2015
You've spelled Sota correctly :). Some write it out as Souta. It is Sota in the manga/anime. I adored this chapter. It was so cute and entertaining to read. I am really enjoying this story. I write dark, tragic, gory, twisted fics full of angst. This is a pleasant escape.
Love the mom!!!!!!
Marie (Chapter 7) - Mon 30 Mar 2015
I love the chapter it wasn't boring at all. I love the fact progress is being made. More more more. Progress progress progress. Next please
silvery (Chapter 7) - Sun 29 Mar 2015
I loved it. It made me laugh.
Aziza (Chapter 7) - Sun 29 Mar 2015
This is so cute I want more!
Emiko (Chapter 7) - Sun 29 Mar 2015
It seems katakana characters are not recognized, so I apologize for the confusing ???? in my prior entry.
Still, keep up the great writing. Grammar is but a small thing; I still think it a great and fun story!
Emiko (Chapter 7) - Sun 29 Mar 2015
I very much enjoy your story! As a nerd/geek/otaku, I also very much enjoy your jokes and wordage, lol. I think you have a great knack for it and I find my self chuckling at the quips between the characters very often. I look forward to more soon!
The only suggestion I would make is proofreading. I find some descriptions do not come off as you would probably desire because of mistaken grammar usage or spelling. Most notably in this chapter would be the use of the word "katakana", which is a form of Japanese writing for foreign words or naming. For example, my first name (since my Japanese name of Emiko would most often, with the exception of some older generations that use katakana extensively - be kanji or sometimes hiragana) would be:
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Katana, however, which I believe you meant, is a form of blade.
But please, continue the enjoyable madness!!!
I don't think updates come fast enough to sedate my need to read for this special story! I love ithad me crying and laughing! Threw it all can't wait till the next chappie!!!
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