poor sesshy.... he's was forced to take another man's bitch and unborn child.... this will bring so much shame and he will be laugh at by other youkais... forced to raise someone's child... and the half-breed's unborn child will be heir of the west since sesshy doesn't have him own heir... such unfairness
Dear Yuki-san, it is always a treat to read your stories, no matter the plot, simply because they are so well fleshed out, with the prefect amount of attenttion to every little details. Seriously, in my opinion, it doesn't matter what plot you come up with, it is and will always be delicious!! :)
Honestly, from what I have seen in fanfics and in canon. This form of Sesshoumaru and Kagome runs quite close to the canon versions. I am simply impressed with your story and I hope that you will continue this story for a long while yet! ^.^
This is a fantastic story thus far. I love the internal battles that everyone is facing trying to prevent what will happen if Sess acts or not. What about Kouga? Or continuing the heritage.
Blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Nov 2015
I just found your story and its interesting and original love it hope to see more.. Well written
Saiya (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Nov 2015
Save her Please.
Such a wonderful chapter. So sad to see Kagome in such depression. Thanks so much for updating. Cheers!
Love this story so far! I agree, while I enjoy reading Sessh/Kag fics, I love the anime and Inuyasha's character. I prefer the widow scenario or that Inuyasha simply loses Kagome due to his indecision or mistakes rather than him being evil in some way.
Didie (Chapter 6) - Mon 02 Nov 2015
Finally an update from youuu! *happy dance*
You're absolutely right! I dislike when Kagome and Inuyasha separated because of he choose another or some bad terms, too... I think their bond not that fragile to be broke from just some trivia matters... come on.. he (Inuyasha) isn't that bad.. only his brashness left bitter taste that sometimes I wish I could 'OSUWARI' him too..hahaha..
Good job Kagome Yuki Niwa-san! Hope you could updating more frequently... *puppy eyes*
Haven (Chapter 6) - Mon 02 Nov 2015
This is...wow....I-I can't wait to read more..
this is a great great story though i really hate waiting on these small story snippets, you have sparked my interest though. i hope you will not keep me waiting long for a few more chapters.
Those last three chapters were lovely. Hard to say No to Rin. She rarely asks for anything. Looking forward to your next update.
Very nice chapter. I like Jin, he looks to be interesting.
I'm up for the ride....the beginning looks good.
This is going to gut me, I just know it. But I love the premise. SO MUCH! The promise of angst is strong in this one, and I'm a sucker for such fics. *sighs*
Amazing opening chapter! I dunno if this has been done before, but I haven't read anything like it, so I was instantly drawn to it. The writing is wonderful as always, perfect grammar and vivid imagery, but I'd expect nothing less from you. It tugs at my heartstrings! The character portrayals are very mature, especially Shippou. I love that!
I'mma pace myself with this one, though I've already fallen for it.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us, 'Gome! You're incredible! I'm SO glad you're back!
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Wed 27 May 2015
Go Rin you are amazing
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