Yes, Izayoi is cool. But, I'm liking Kagome less. I know she is traumatized and anxious, that she's scared. But, her penchant for rationalizing and trying to hide in some alternate reality is frustrating. I feel sorry for Sesshoumaru that she is his other half... Awful things can happen to those who never did anything to deserve it, and unfortunately they can be chronic. As Edward Elrich says, "You've got two legs, use them." She has to move forward and allow others to make decisions for themselves. If Sesshoumaru wants her, problems and all, that's his choice. Let's face it, she'll never be able to just forget him and misses him terribly. I look forward to the moment when she realizes this truth, whether someone has to tell her or she figures it out for herself.
Scarlet (Chapter 4) - Sun 19 Jul 2015
Can't wait for the next chapter!
HA! I knew it! I. knew. IT! I knew Inu No Tashio was going to need her help! I knew it! Omg! I have never hated him before, but the way you wrote his character? UGH! I kind of want her to be like. Suck it Inu No Baka! And kick him in the nuts. I want him to beg her! To get on his knees and BEG! How DARE he show his face! AAAAAARRRRRGGGHHHAAAAA! BISH WHET?! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
OKAY. sorry. Forgive me. I'm done ranting. Reading this masterpiece has been an emotional rollercoaster. I nearly threw my phone out the window. I love where you're going with this. Keep up the amazing work!
And Tashio can KISS MY A-.... Ehem. Sorry. Yeah. Fantastic piece. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Jestshine (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jul 2015
love the story, love the fact that you update so regularly, can't wait for the next update!
rose (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jul 2015
next chapter please
Mona (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jul 2015
Two in one day, I could not have asked for anything better. Thanks so much for the update.
No Uta (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jul 2015
Holy shit! I did NOT see this coming at all! Ok -ok let me try and collect my thoughts for they are all over the place. Let me back track to the beginning of this chapter ( still holy shitting ). I absolutely adore what you've done with Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's relationship! It is absolutely precious and unique. The brothers are usually at odds in most tales, including my own. This is pleaseant change - refreshing if you will. I had to laugh at Teuro-San having placed a restraining order on Sesshomaru. I swear Sesshomaru has gone bat shit crazy tee hee. Well he actually has. I am impressed at Toga seeking Miroku for therapy. I definitely did not expect that. He's sincere about trying to repair the relationship with his first son. I like it. As I was reading I immediately took note that Sesshomaru and Izayoi were traveling to Seychelles. My first thoughts were - uh oh this can't be good. They're going to accidentally cross paths and all hell will break loose. Never once did it occur to me that Toga was determined to make amends with Kagome after all that has happened. I must say I chuckled at her blasting his ass. He definitely deserved it. Toga must really be genuine in wishing to repair things with his son. He's reaching out to the very woman he'd condemned and even physically injured. I'm looking forward to the following chapter. Another outstanding update my friend!
Please update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next. Thanks
Mona (Chapter 3) - Fri 17 Jul 2015
WOW!!! I greatly enjoyed the update, I wonder if she will eventually accept Jun's dating proposal or Kouga's. Or if the media spotted Jun on a date and publicized it.
No Uta (Chapter 3) - Fri 17 Jul 2015
As I'm certain you know I'm saddened by Shin’ichi's passing, however I am extremely grateful that you did not go into detail about him slowly withering away. I truly do not think I could have handled it. I cannot believe I've gotten attached to a character in a fic. This is a first. I kill off my characters in fics without a second thought and here I am relieved that you were gentle with his passing. His monument and graveside sounded lovely. It was beautifully written as well as Sesshomaru's interaction with Inuyasha. It was near and dear to my heart. I will miss Shin’ichi terribly. #Team Honourable Shin’ichi for life. Though fallen he shall never be forgotten. Lawd...let me stop before I cry my eyes out. I see you've added Miroku as Sesshomaru's therapist. That is a bloody brilliant idea! I'm enjoying how you're developing his character so far. Sesshomaru is making progress in his healing. Anger is part of that process. I cannot say I blame him for being angry with her for not paying respects to Shin’ichi yet at the same time I also cannot blame Kagome for not doing so. Such things aren't as easy as we'd like them to be. The woman was traumatized. I realize as was Sesshomaru. I see both sides. I noticed you thre a litte bit of Koga in the mix. I'm thrilled to read that you chose to have Jun-Long pursue Kagome or at least flirt with her. I was crossing fingers for this! Jun-Long is one of my favourites. I'd love to see him continue to develop further. It adds for sizzling awkwardness. Jun is sexy. I'm fan-girling for him hard haha. DON'T KILL HIM WOMAN! Heh - my apologies. Fantastic update!
rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 17 Jul 2015
next chapter please
rose (Chapter 2) - Fri 17 Jul 2015
next chapter please
No Uta (Chapter 2) - Fri 17 Jul 2015
Oh hell YEAYUS! My brain is so frazzled from writing the next chapter to my own tale that I took a break. Fortunately for me I happened to check my phone and there it was! An update for this absolutely amazing sequel! Wow Kagome's really standing by her decision to leave Japan and Sesshomaru. Poor guy's a bloody drunken mess. Taisho appears to have genuine concern for his son. Hell that farce of an engagement ended anyway. Taisho's an imbecile for his rash decision making. I'm of course saddened by Shin’ichi's condition. I know it's coming and when it does I will cry like a whiney b*tch over it. My eyes teared up just reading about his failing health. I do enjoy Teuro's character. I like how you've developed him further in this chapter. I also fancied how he hung up on Kagome. He's finally showing some emotion. He's normally very collected. I'm glad Asil and Kagome are coming around. I'm curious about why he hasn't fully accepted her as his daughter yet. He practically bellows on about how she is his daughter to her - always laying claim. Has he not acknowledged it publicly I wonder? I reeeeeally fancy Jun-Long. Am I dreadful for wanting him to pursue Kagome? I'm probably one of the few readers that gets a kick out of Kagome or Sesshomaru engaging with OCs and other characters in that fashion in Sessh/Kag fics. It gives a story multiple layers or at least in my opinion it does. I'm curious to see how things go for her when she leaves to the location Jun is sending her too.
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No Uta (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2015
Though this chapter was both riveting and heart-wrenching I must first address your author's notes ...lololololol omfg I'm so sorry, but that was bloody hilarious. I haven't read the reviews you've received for the final chapter of, Love is Blind, gathering from the tone of your notes I think I'm going to be a busy body and go read these threats hahahahaha. I am however pleasantly surprised to see that you updated the sequel this soon. Hell... you'll get not one complaint from me over it. I am as happy as good ole Shin’ichi feasting upon a plump and juicy, rare steak! I see that Socrates has made a cameo. You know how much I love that crazy fookin cat. Thank you for bringing him back. Now on to my review of this chapter. It was truly refreshing to see Kagome and Asil almost bonding like father and daughter. I understand that she still has her reservations about him and holds on to the contempt she felt at being abandoned, however it is crystal clear Asil loves his daughter. It may not be the most healthiest fashions of love - yet it exists. I too am shocked that she sought him out to aid her in her plan to leave Japan undiscovered. Perhaps she realized what her father was capable of after having murdered Naraku. Asil loves fiercely. Almost in a similar fashion to Sesshomaru. I am actually glad she escaped from all that insanity. It wasn't a good place for her, if even for a moment so that she may collect herself. I agree with your A/N running away from problems isn't always the solution. At times, we never really break free from them when we flee. I still feel poor Kagome deserves a break. Hell anyone of us would I think. I don't find Kagome the villain for leaving her alpha high and dry; too much has happened. The attack on her person by her alphas's own sire is enough to send anyone with even a small percentage of common sense, running as far the fook away from those bat shit crazy Taisho's as possible. Granted Kagome and Asil herself aren't the most errr...stable individuals but for now... anything is better than were she was once. There are times all the love in the world isn't enough to keep a relationship a float. This particular chapter resonantes true for me, for I myself experienced a volatile situation involving an ex and his parents. This is one of the many reasons I enjoy your style of writing. Sure there's comedic relief, drama LOTS OF DRAMA, angst, tragedy, bloody fookin murders too, oh yes let us not forget the lemons! OOOOH THE LEMONS! Ahem...ohaiaai! Yes, yes I have collected myself. Anyhow my point is that in a sea of all I mentioned above, you always find a way to keep things real. You have managed to pull this off in a story that is full of magic, demons and lore. I believe this is why you are capable of pulling your readers into your every chapter and possibly why you may have been threatened an virtual butt kicking as per your notes lolol. It just means your story is that bloody brilliant and your readers are hooked! I as always will continue to patiently and quietly wait for your updates and continue my reviews as I have been.
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2015
Oh Poor Kags that Pain had to be really bad.
A great first chapter... i love it so far plz keep it coming.
Susi8 (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2015
Awesome job!! I like where this is going. I hope that Kagome can get in good terms with her father Asil. I'm sorry to say this, but I'm glad that Sesshomaru beat his father to a pulp! And Sesshomaru needs to start making his own decisions, man. (^_^)
Mia (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2015
T.T
I'm on pins and needles!
Mona (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2015
Fantastic!!!! I loved the prologue and can't wait to read more.
Thanks for posting part two of the series so quickly, I wasn't expecting it so soon but it is greatly appreciated.
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