Ooooooohhhhhhh I'm so excited to see where this is going! What is going to happen to her?! Will she change? Tell me now!!!  Pwease? 

Owie.

My first thought (being an ex-anatomy teacher) was that was certainly NOT the most direct path if she wanted to put the jewel close to or in her heart. It was just fine hanging out by her spleen or kidney or wherever before, so why the need to go through A LOT of critical tissues? Just so she wouldn't add a new scar to her torso? And technically her arm would have a heck of a time attaining the right angle to push that little marble up into the right spot, even if she had super-long fingers.

But that is me being a biologist. The fanfic reader in me is thinking, oooh, this is an interesting direction! and is looking forward to the next installment.

next chapter please

Ohhhhhh!!!! It's bloody and pain it actually sent shivers down my spine! *shiver* So her friends finally decided to tough up and help her restore it back inside her body. Cool. Wonder what happens next.

Dear Muse:

Open up and say "-Ahhhh-"

Good! You are a beautiful and very cute muse, but you can bed a bit mean sometimes, like today; when you write such a wonderful chapter, and then decide to leave us in a cliff.

Because of that, here is a very yummy slice of cheesecake, but because you were mean, you decided to tease us, and left us with a "WHAT?? What happens next???" I am going to take away the delicious strawberries that were garnishing that yummy cheesecake.

If you update soon, and promise to make a nice long chapter, I promise not only the whole strwberry cheesecake with yummy strawberries, but also a yummy and delicious lasagna, made with tons of love!

For now, all I would say is that you have me hooked and can't wait for more!

Omg yes! Im not usualy and short chapter fan but this style totally works for this. Love it!

O.O

It's exciting! 

I hope her friends doubt over her decision doesn't effect her wishh and it stays pure 

I'm intrigued.  Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Good start... Mmm consistent, short cliffy yeah cliffed before a good angst... Otherwise OK smiling Cheshire cat smile....

Hooray number two. Little mad that her friends are being total asshats like she's done it all. Can't wait for the next chapter

They didn't support her? Typical, but not farfetch especially Inuyasha. Absolutely hate him.

Im really interested to see the metamorphosis happen. Will there be a abrupqt change? Or a subtle one. Will there even be a physical change? Im interested to see. I like the selfishness of her thoughts. it makes her more human then just this always pure being. And then she pushes the thoughts aside like any regular person would do. Just forget and focus. I like it. 

Ohhhhh!!!! So interesting! Gotta watch out for this!

Interesting so Far.

You're backkkk ! :) interested in where this story will go.

Hmmm I wonder if Naruka did something to Kagome before he died to make her think putting the jewel back in her was a smart idea.  It seems logical that wishing it away would suffice.