Ooooo yes!! He's in love. I'm so kiddy my heart is burstin out of my chest right now....wonder what's gonna happen next.
my dear pq, i dont think i can express how much this chapter meant for me. For so many reasons i loved it of course because you write so wonderfully, the emotion and description here were just beautiful The birth was like so many i have seen (My moms a midwife) such a personal thing to share and so beautifully done. I laughed out loud at the u shaped chair. People always ask about that. I cant wait for more! ♥♥♥
I really, really enjoy this story. Fanfiction has always been a bit of a guilty pleasure - a way to induge a craving for a sweet romance or bawdiness without the inconvencince of having a romance novel sitting on my bookshelf (they aren't great conversation pecies), but stories like yours remind me that there is so much untapped tallent out there. I love how you breathe so much live into charicters that are no longer living. Kagome's personality is incredible (I'd like to hangout with her). Her responcible recklessness is refreshing. I enjoy how you've depicted Rin. The candyland sene was priceless. Your characterisation is complex and wellrounded. It brings incredible realism to the story. There's so much in your story I can identify with. Thank you for reminding me there is still exellent fan fiction out there and keep up the good work.
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Your chapters never seem long. They always pull me in so far that I cannot feel the passage of time. They always hold me so completely that nothing else in the room seems to exist.
I am amazed by how seamlessly you move me through a huge range of emotions. Words so beautifully written, so descriptive, that I can see every movement of the characters as if I were watching a movie.
Each update for this story is like a present. I can hardly wait to open it and see what is inside. I can hardly wait to see what is next.
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderfully written, beautifully crafted story.
CJ
MORE! More damnit I want more! I think this is my favorite of all. Its different but yet still has all the special pieces needed. Update fast like tomorrow so I can read at work, my job is boring!!! LOVE IT!!
He's not the only one who has fallen in love...so have I.
I always get excited and giddy when I see an update to this story because I know I'm instore for a long addition. And not just lengthy, but high quality writing that allows me a glimpse into their everyday lives. I love stories like that.
And I love your take on their friendship, and her teasing him, and him liking it...secretly of course.
Wonderful
As you know, I love the way you write... I was smiling all through her sending him on the little errands, and crying all through the video, I just felt her pain so intensely... I miss Inuyasha and Kikyou too!
I love how you are slowly pulling them toward each other and how they are finally realizing how much they value each other's friendship. Absence makes the heart grow fonder, so I'm hoping this trip he has to take has that effect on both of them!
Zombie walk. Sesshomaru dressing up as Sephiroth. And that whole bit about various absurd male fears. I officially love you.
::Wipes tears from eyes:: So good.
I love the way Kagome and Sesshoumaru keep sharing moments that bring them closer and closer together. I also love the relationship between Kagome, Kikyo, and Inuyasha. There was such a tight bond there, and the descriptions of them keep making me cry. Great work.
Oh THANK YOU. I spent a whole 30 minutes in total bliss, forgetting all the woes of the world. It might have been a bugger of a chapter to write, but it sure READ beautifully... and poignantly... and... perfectly. As I am all-too-fond of saying lately, YOU ROCK!! :-) ~~me~~
I love this story so much, I've been reading since just a little before Spark closed. The way you have the characters lives so perfectly portrayed and the way those lives match so perfectly with their personalities is amazing. The interaction with the characters is also so real, everday and relatable yet incredibly intriguing makes it all the more interesting to read. The way you haven't rushed into the romantic relationship makes the story that much more suspenseful as well. I eagerly await your next update.
MontiK
It makes me so happy when I see a new chapter of your story posted. This one was a beauty, the part about watching the video of Rin's birth was so touching. I don't know why, but I kept thinking once she got better, it would be the chapter where she and Sess got together. I hope it comes soon, but I still want the story to go on and on...
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