Oh yeah.....
Forgot to mention that InuYasha ought to be the gallant gentleman and treat Kagome the way she should be. Maybe ask her to join him on his trip back to the US for a vaction to get away from all this fallout. Maybe something could grow from that.
Let's just twist the knife in Sesshoumaru's gut for being such a self absorbed wuss, while he stands back at the party inebriated, not wanting to be a real man by at least putting forth an effort to clean up his mess. Watching as Kagara walks downstairs to mingle as he hopes that InuYasha is the one to direct Kagome away from further heartache...then he passes out...
What a totally useless prick....
Mona (Chapter 9) - Sat 19 Dec 2015
p.s. I'm starting to agree with some of the other reviewers, I hope it's to late for him to win her back and he is just alone living in self regret. While Kagome is happy without him, possibly with Inuyasha.
Mona (Chapter 9) - Sat 19 Dec 2015
The reveal, on Inuyasha's side and the reaction, Sesshoumaru's side, priceless. This was great and I hope to read more soon.
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Dec 2015
Poor Kagome......
Hope Inuyasha makes her see her self worth. Bet that this will create a deep chasm between the two brothers. Sesshoumaru deserves all the gut twisting guilt he is going through also.
I'm very confused here, I am almost positive that you had 5-8 more chapters posted after this? Did they become deleted? I hope not, I quite enjoyed how it had played out so far.
soon he woud realize that he just loves all about kagome, and in the end maybe it's too late :(
Well, that was awkard. Although long awaited.
So excited with this chapter.
Mona (Chapter 8) - Sat 19 Dec 2015
I hope you do an intimate scene or insinuate one of Kagome and Inuyasha, since you did one and insinuate one for Sesshoumaru and Kagura. Sesshoumaru can't be the only one having fun while they are broken up, it's only fair.
p.s. Please update again soon.
Ren (Chapter 8) - Sat 19 Dec 2015
I love love love this! Even though I'm not a fan of Sesshomaru with anyone other than Kagome, I still can't help but really like this fanfiction. A part of me wants her to fall for InuYasha, which hasn't happened in a very long time, while Sesshomaru realizes his mistakes one at a time. Eventually leading to him discovering the fact that his brother now has the woman who would not leave his thoughts.
I can't wait to read the chapter when Sesshomaru finally discovers her new relationship or even just checking in with mutual friends and learning she has been seeing someone. Keep up the good work, you have all the character's personalities on lock down.
Great Story.
Mona (Chapter 7) - Thu 17 Dec 2015
Awesome please update again soon. I cannot wait to read more soon.
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