Looking good sofar, but 27 could use an extra proofread.
Singular of allies is "ally" Fowl = A category of birds (chickens, turkey, duck/geese, phesant, peafowl & such), Disgusting = Foul
Would be eaten, not ate (think there was a few simmilar ones in 28/29 aswell)
Oh poor she forgot about smell.
Saiya (Chapter 29) - Thu 19 Nov 2015
hehehe
Pamela (Chapter 29) - Thu 19 Nov 2015
Haha! Wonder what Kagome got herself into:)
Hehe drunk Sesshomaru. Now that he has permission to ask to snuggle, wonder if he will take advantage of it.
Cant wait for the next update.
I feel like I was just teased, the images.... Omg.... Please continue haha.
Didie (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015
It is what I think it is? I hope I'll get it right! Sesshoumaru 'mistake' at chapter 28, made his and Kagome's relationship questionable, and her honor in stake... sooo... hmm... what our honorable ruler do to save an honor of his valuable ally...? Nyahahahaha.... *evil laugh*
Personal I would have taken another look ( smile)
Saiya (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA he Stripped NAKED into HER Bed so Priceless.
Pamela (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015
Ah haha! Sesshoumaru is a naughty doggie. That was hilarious and steamy all at the same time. Woohoo! I like how they are getting closer and how Sess is a big snuggle bunny where Kagome is concerned. I imagine that was quite a surprise for Kagome to feel Sess pressed against her and after she had such an intense dream, care to share what Kagome's dream was about. Great chapters.
Debra (Chapter 28) - Wed 18 Nov 2015
Great chapter! Sesshoumaru got naked and slipped in her bed, too awesome! Love that she told him next time to just ask. I guess she doesn't mind as long as she isn't surprised.
Saiya (Chapter 27) - Wed 18 Nov 2015
Aawwww hehehehe
Sesshy just being himself lol
Saiya (Chapter 26) - Fri 13 Nov 2015
Awwww
Pamela (Chapter 26) - Thu 12 Nov 2015
I love how her kimono is representative of her standing as the Shikon Miko. I would love to know what Sess is really thinking in his head:) poor Kagome is stuck with Mr. Icypants, hehe
Nice, keep it coming.
Mona (Chapter 26) - Thu 12 Nov 2015
Great update, hope more is to come soon.
Keep it coming.
Thanks for the update.
Pamela (Chapter 25) - Wed 11 Nov 2015
I love this story. Nice chapter with them meeting in his personal library. The poetry line was perfect, indeed, so hilarious. Way to ruin the mood Jaken. Excited for the ball and what she will wear and how her and Sess will interact:) it's making me a little to giddy, haha!
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