Our Summers Lost by I-lov3-drells

A Lost Memory

The day was a bright and full of luaghter in the air. The smell of flowers and grass had a calming smell to them. A little black hair daiyokai ran in the fields like nothing even matter. She was havng so much fun chasing birds and butterflies when she almost didnt smell the faint scent of blood. She noticed it wasn't her own blood but someone elses. Wit grat haste she made her way towards the smell. When she got there she saw a boy about 12 leaning against a tree, breathing hard and with blood coming out of his shoulder. She moves towards him, wanting help, but didn't expect this reaction.

"Stay away from me demon! Your kind has caused enough pain as in it is!" He yells at her with such angry and hatred dripping from his voice.

"I'm not here to hurt you." She spoke in a soft voice, " Please I can stop your bleeding if you let me help you." She slowly grows more corcrened for the young boy.

"No, go away I don't need no demons help." He says in disgust.

"I'm really sorry about this, but if I don't stop your bleeding soon you may die." She says in a corcern voice. She slowy releases her special toxin that well help him sleep

"What are you..." He says as he slowy fells into a deep sleep on the ground floor.

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Let me know if this sounds better then the last one. For those who read this on FF.net I'll fix that one once my computer to work right. :) Please reveiw and let me know if it sound even better then before. Please and thank you.