Knight of Disorder
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Created On: 01/25/2018 12:11:17
Thanks for the review on Pride of the Inu. It's hard to write the cold stoic and still have him show some kind of affection. I'm still working on how I'm going to keep his character in later chapters. Feedback from MythMagykFae: Good luck, I tend to end up waaayyy Out of Character XD
So far so good in your story though, and it is so fun to read!
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FragmentedMatter
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Created On: 11/26/2017 20:45:00
Thank you for your review on Inevitability! I really like how Sesshomaru and Kagome interact with each other. I hope you do too!
-FDS
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Crimson Rose
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Created On: 08/21/2017 10:37:25
I'm glad you're entertained! Makes me feel like I don't suck as a writer but thank you for your review on BL. I appreciate you!
- CR
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FragmentedMatter
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Created On: 05/06/2017 22:41:33
As always, thank you so much for your reviews on Inevitability! I truly apologise that it's taken me so long to reply to your wonderful comments, but I hope you will enjoy the new update that should be coming VERY soon!
Stay gold!
-FDS Feedback from MythMagykFae: I'm sure I will, and don't worry about replying! I know how busy life is, I'm in the hell of finals week right now XD and I'm sure you are just as if not more busy. (: I love the story and look forward to more!
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Aviel
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Created On: 03/27/2017 21:28:37
Hey!
Thanks for another note on Kindred Spirits! As we've seen in Ch. 8, Kagome's mental health is slowly improving, and it is a very good thing. Most authors tend to gloss over a character's depression, but few ever explore its other facets. There's a large misconception that it only means that someone is incredibly sad and/or suicidal. But even normal people can show symptoms of the disease and not even know it. Kagome's dose happens to come with a sprinkle of PTSD.
People IRL react to trauma differently, but I've never been aware of somebody seeing so much violence and death and not be affected. Unless they were a complete sociopath or something. But that's a totally different topic that I won't delve into.
That being said, while Kagome's internal struggles will continue to be highlighted here and there, there probably won't be another chapter dedicated to her depression again. I'm hoping to be mindful of my readers that might view it as a sensitive subject and not be as comfortable reading about it. My goal is for you guys to enjoy my work without any conflict.
So, I'll forever appreciate your patience and time for giving my story a chance. Happy reading! Feedback from MythMagykFae: I think you're doing a great job displaying the emotions involved. It is necessary for time, support, and lots of love to be given to the one suffering, and some counseling wouldn't hurt either. I appreciate that you try to address it in a non offensive but still fairly in-depth and emotional manner. (LOL when psych majors get into story appreciation)
I look forward to more and enjoy the effort and love clearly put into the tale!
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AnimeGirlMiranda
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Created On: 03/14/2017 23:58:21
Lol yup! Had it planned from the beginning pretty much. He died too easily. I'm glad you enjoyed the moments with the kids! Thanks for your review!
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Aviel
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Created On: 02/20/2017 23:45:33
Hello again!
Just stopping by to say thanks for your comments on Kindred Spirits! It's about a month late, but I hope you don't mind. I am happy, however, about the points you brought up in Chapter 7. I always hope I don't overdo it with descriptions during those ramblings of mine. But with S/K together, I've found that those two never want to stop talking lol. Hence the multiple goodbyes and the number of subjects they blow through. Kagome, I can understand, but who knew that Sesshoumaru had it in him? At least he's been mostly civil. Feedback from MythMagykFae: Hahaha, naw I get it, the characters like to run the show sometimes despite the author's plans XD
Don't worry about timing either, RL is busy and takes precedence always. If you're busy we will wait and enjoy when you get time to post (: Great story!
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AnimeGirlMiranda
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Created On: 02/13/2017 23:28:55
Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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SilverontheRose
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Created On: 02/08/2017 11:14:41
Thank you for your review of Seasons. I love mythology, but relationships between the mortal and supernatural world very rarely are not presented as tragedies. I wanted to give a little hope to the natural track of Sesshoumaru and Kagome's lives.
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Aviel
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Created On: 01/07/2017 00:11:32
Hello!
Thanks for your recent review on Kindred Spirits! I'm glad you enjoyed S/K's bout of silliness. It certainly makes their dynamic somewhat... interesting haha. Anyway, I hope you look forward to the future chapters! Feedback from MythMagykFae: I do, I can't wait to read more, have fun writing!
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