| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Sapphire- Sun 16 Sep 2007
| Your story is VERY hard to read. VERRYYY HARD
Not important- Sun 16 Sep 2007
Promise me that you won't write anymore. I'm serious because you suck. When people are talking, use " or '. Like this.
"Hi Sesshoumarus," said Kagome.
Or something like that. You suck.
| LOVE this story.
Megan Consoer- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
| Good story plotlin,but is poorly written.maybe a bet would help.i cannot tell if there talking or thinking everthing.its muddled together.
| Hey i like it so far but it is realy hard to tell who is talking and what is not talking try using quotation marks it might help first time readers figure out what is going on! Other then that keep going! Just tryin to help, Heather
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