This was a great story! I always love stories where she turn into a demon... i gues bc she can have cute little demon babies with sessou...anyway love the story and can't wait to read the others you have written!

*claps hands furiously* Another well done story! I have to admit, you are one of my favorite authors on this site! I have read almost all your stories now, and they are all so wonderful. Though my favorite so far is still "The Portal". *bows in respect*

I'm a little saddened by the lack of positive reviews you recieved from this story. I was impressed with it, as I know that I could never write something so creative. :D Keep up the good work on all your fics!

-ItsNotMe

omg ur such a wonderful wrighter i have read alot of ur stories and compared to soooooooooo many others making there charachters so ooc u actually kept with there actual character im immpressed thanks for making stories worth reading

Well this isn't your best work. I didn't feel the love between Kagome and Sesshomaru and with "As Death Gives Life" and "The Portal" I really felt it. In this one it feels more like you're telling us instead of showing us what is going on. I don't really feel a connection with the characters and I must say I am disappointed.

I've noticed that you often spell 'Nuraku' instead of 'Naraku' in quite a lot of your works, I was just wondering if it's a typo or intentional.

Excellent story. I truely enjoyed it and stayed up late to finish reading it. Thank you for sharing your story

aww Bravo! Bravo indeed! I'm finding I like your stories very much. ::chuckles grinning:: such unique ideas and workings. I luv 'em! ^_^ Okay, off to read another one now. JA!

Change Nuraku to Naraku.