| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Megan Consoer- Wed 19 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Megan Consoer- Sat 15 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Kitty- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| btw, when you write even messy like that, you should enter and space between your conversations and paragraphs not bundle it all together, because no one knows who the hell is speaking...-.- or when they're speaking, you have a good potential if you thought your stuff through, don't try to summerize and get it all over with if you want to rush u shouldn't write at all
Kitty- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| You have a good plot line, but you do more summerizing than writing, this fic goes way to fast, if you would spread out your details then you would of made an awesome fic, you just can make Sesshomaru pop out of nowhere and "passionantly" kiss Kagome and Shippou be the only one know her secret but then all her other friends know, this is terrible, but the thought of the fanfic is what counts, I looked at your other fanfic the summery makes it interesting but its so short and summerized, would you really want someone to write a fanfic like that for you?
Megan Consoer- Wed 15 Nov 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
stacie gustafson- Wed 02 Aug 2006
| *twitch... so many incomplete sentences...*twitch. use some compound and complex sentences in your next fanfic okay?
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