chapter 7 is not crap. I think it's awsome. The way you cut it of just when he told her he was training her I think it was very dramatic.
Your bestist fan Kayla

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YAY! As I was scrolling...I saw the word fin and I was like WAT! then i realized I was on chappie 20 x-x but thanks for the eplo...banana .>..> and -sigh- I haven't read it yet, I usually don't review due to laziness and that the story is already done >.> -i likey the already fin stories, its better ne? no wait and anntipication...yea my reviewers hate me o.o;;; -haven't reviewed in like...what.....-cough last year cough- *shippou glares with sock* OKIE...I'LL SHUP UP THANKIES FLUFFY-CH...er....FLUTTER OF..ok -.- time for a nickname! THANKIE BIRDY-CHAN!!!!! For a awesome chappie and story

ah, now I understand the comm.er...talking thing between minds. Please, excuse this hot sexy kitten for her misjudgments. -bows- TO MUCH ANIME XD......LMFAO I'M PUTTIN THAT IN A STORY XD

“Tsk Tsk, Lady Kag—WHAT THE FUCK!?”

OK PAUSE IN STORY...I NEED A MOMENT TO....

ROLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDD!!

-cough bak 2 readin just wanted u to know that XD

TO MUCH JAPANESE! -ROLLS AROUND ON FLOOR- X-X! I understand most but its like X_X MUH T.T;

um....o.o -cough- i'm alittle late . but isn't Sesshomaru able to read Kagomes minds since they mated, and wouldn't he already know that she was up to no good? -cough cough- and lmfao, everytime I get to the bottom of the chapter I see, wittle author, and I click next so fast, and don't pay attention then it hits me and I click the back button and i'm like o.o....XD! I do that alot in my fanfics I didn't know how funny it was xD! I hit the back button like six times -lika retart o.o- well i'm rambling >.> maybe its because of this keyboard, its soft...and I like it...mmm...softness...Shippo:- shoves sock in her mouth- x()X;; -pulls sock out and presses enter with a sigh- -_-;;

WAAAT WHERES TEH REST T.T THIS IS PUNISHMENT FROM THE LAST REVIEW LOL I MEAN v.v

lmfao xD nopeh >.> cuz -drums- I can click next! xD muvhahaha! -runs around laughing more- -trips - x_X muha x_X;;;;;;;

uh...-went back n read-;.......-feelin alittle stupid xD I mean awh v.v XD

OMG CONFUSING T-T; Maybe I shouldn't have scanned though v.v XD i'm a author too x-x just going through a brain fart, its been along time since i've read stuff _;;; -goes back and re...nah -scans- CONFUSING T.T;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; -eats chocolate- ah...i understand the meaning of life XD!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?